Purity Staind By Life
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5656#post765656 I tremble beneath the cold, lifeless touch of the rain as I walk towards the garden My mind set upon the future I have created for my own well being My hair matted against my face, only serves to distract me from this ill-gotten destiny Mindlessly trudging through the mud, eyes fixed upon that subtle patch of white The garden entwined with beautiful roses, red pulsing through every petal Each rose is more handsome then the last and they are all comforting to me Finally my struggle ends as I come upon the beautiful grace of that single white rose So clean and majestic, the white rose remains untainted by this harsh reality These liquid emotions swelling up inside of me, thicker then the blood that flows through my dying heart Soon the rain finds itself jaded by salty tears, just as I have found my soul corrupted by this disturbed life Silently my new found lover approaches me as that majestic white rose looks on It is my razor that shall become my new found friend and allow me to free my broken soul from my body Slowly caressing my tense nerves, easing my troubled mind, calming my tears and half-hearted aggressions The razor dances along my skin which is as white as that single white majestic rose Kissing me deeply, engulfed within a fierce and forceful passion, aiding me in my silent struggle Blood drips slowly from my lips as I lust for more of the razors endless touch Tears resume to fall down upon that majestic white rose as it looks upon me with its virgin self Now that tragedy has struck my soul leaving me with a simple and faithful image Those beautiful white petals now tainted by my blood, stripping it of its purity The dripping blood paints a path that I dare not take back towards my horrific past My tears fall upon the rose, streaking its crimson stained petals and rolling off The once comforting breeze now chills me to the core and the no longer majestic rose shutters beneath its caress A simple now red petal falls away from its sanctuary as it starts its own long journey to its end Swaying back and forth as it gently glides to the ground, I watch in a silenced daze And as that simple, single petal falls to rest upon the gruesome soil I am overcome with sorrow Not a sorrow for what I’ve done nor those I’ve hurt nor a sorrow for the pain that I’ve caused myself But a sorrow for that once pure, single white rose and the tragedy that I’ve forced upon it ~Hope Ya Like~ ~I dont write often but when i do i put my heart into it so plz leave good feed~ ~I wrote this about a pic i made that i attached~ |
up plz
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n e one????
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you gotta wait a little while for some replys k, and reply to other ones to, then ppl will reply to yours about the piece, it really did show that when you do write something you put alot into it. it was a good piece sometimes i did lose myself in the flow, it turned out to be more of just a slow read spoken thing, cause the lines were so long. but you had so much emotion in it so much effort and so much truth, although this is getting to be a topic thats written about, it was still a good read, and you represtented it in a way i havent seen done before, comparing it with the white rose and all the line that stood out to me was: Kissing me deeply, engulfed within a fierce and forceful passion, aiding me in my silent struggle my love ~Tera~ DONT HATE BTW thats such a strong picture i looked at it in thought for like 5 minutes |
wow thnx lol and yes this is one of the longest pieces ive writen
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Badass picture, extremely badass drop. I can see how the picture influenced you, I thought the imagery of the one white rose was CRAZY good. The text color made it all the more powerfull, very good drop. return the favor plz
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no doubt thnx
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um up plz i think
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