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LyricalJedi 01-12-04 04:36 PM

LyricalJedi VS Smiley
 
15 minutes after checking in
Blind spit
No crew vote
No BULLSHIT VOTES

I got my hands full on this one

LyricalJedi 01-12-04 04:47 PM

Checkin in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........................

:) 01-12-04 04:54 PM

checkin in................................................ .................................................. ....................

LyricalJedi 01-12-04 05:02 PM

Yo kid fuck a smiley face
Damage your vocal so bad you'll sound retarded like mase
Spray your whole shit like cops spray mace to people people
Nigga your name is worth then a
fuck ihave to go

:) 01-12-04 05:04 PM

aiight fuck it man not my best .. just some shit
yo lyrical jedi check this out man


ill leave you BATTERED AND SLAIN
and then SHATTER YA BRAIN, chew you up and spit you out on the wackenss emergency center along with your SCATTERED REMAINS
and get it right man you need to make your SPITS IMPROVE
cuz even though its SICK AND TRUE,
the only "multi" you've ever performed is given head to "two DIFFERENT DUDES"
its so easy to have you RIPPED IN TWO
cuz your a faggot whos 2 AND 5, whos favor pastime is SCRWIN GUYS
you aint straight bitch you just made up some fake NEWS AND LIED
what you really NEED BE PRACTICE
cuz your on your kness more than a SLEAZY ACTRESS,
your fuckin assholes like gay clubs the cuz it allows alot of men EASY ACCESS
so just give up bitch cuz youll never TEST ME PUNK
i fight like JET LI DRUNK
ill leave your damn head with more bumps than the back of a NESTLE CRUNCH

killed!!!!!

:) 01-12-04 05:08 PM

damn i got to edit this crap

aiight here we go

aiight fuck it man not my best .. just some shit
yo lyrical jedi check this out man


ill leave you BATTERED AND SLAIN
and then SHATTER YA BRAIN,
chew you up and spit you out on the wackenss emergency center along with your SCATTERED REMAINS
and get it right man you need to make your SPITS IMPROVE
cuz even though its SICK AND TRUE,
the only "multi" you've ever performed is given head to "two DIFFERENT DUDES"
its so easy to have you RIPPED IN TWO
cuz your a faggot whos 2 AND 5, whos favorite pastime is SCREWIN GUYS
you aint straight bitch you just made up some fake NEWS AND LIED,
son what you really NEED BE PRACTICE
cuz your on your kness more than a SLEAZY ACTRESS,
your fuckin assholes like gay clubs the cuz it allows alot of men EASY ACCESS
so just give up bitch cuz youll never TEST ME PUNK
i fight like JET LI DRUNK
ill leave your damn head with more bumps than the back of a NESTLE CRUNCH

killed!!!!!

Freeman 01-12-04 05:15 PM

Jedi... was that ur verse?

please tell me it isnt...................................

if it is you lose and :) wins.........................

i'll jus go that it is ur verse........................

seein as there is rhyme somewhere in it...

vote - :)

:) 01-12-04 05:21 PM

uppin for more votes............................................. ........................................

Freeman 01-12-04 05:24 PM

LMAO...

a didnt think that could seriously be his verse...

if it is...

VOTE NOW POLLED.....

Dragon I 01-12-04 05:29 PM

if only i could vote, what i;m about to say would matter, but tehn, as i push towards i point when can, i guess the extra post is gonna help in the end. Lyrical Jedi seems to have been unfortunate in his leaving before finishing his post, so i can't say much about his stuff. As for smiley, his stuff was alright. Doesn't easily flow though, which is a pity, and some of the rhymes aren't to good, like 'SPITS IMPROVE' with 'SICK AND TRUE'. Also noticed a bit of 'day at the races in there' by Jurrasic 5, with 'Battered and slain' and 'scattered remains'. not sure if that counts as biting though. punch lines were good though, so i gues that makes up for it a bit. i'd have to say smiley wins though, but only cos they're isn't enough of lyrical jedi's work to draw a comparison. not saying smiley wouldn't have won if there was though.

:) 01-12-04 05:33 PM

just cuz the nigga aint post shit aint my fault.. up this so i can get my ko................................................ .................................................. ..................

IceMan187 01-12-04 05:43 PM

omg jedi is on the road to worst record on rb
he fuckin sucks
EMERGENCY! HIT UP WACKNESS EMERGENCY IMMEDIATELY
smiley gets the punches, the originality and the sick personals

overall smiley

vote - smiley face killer!

Born To Kill 01-12-04 05:45 PM

Even though Smiley threw a bunch of whack CAPITALIZED shit complete with just about every /(#*@@^%# thrown in it...

It still crushed that non verse by Jedi...

Why explain...

Disses, flow (I'm reaching for this one), wordplay, all that...

Go to Smiley.

Easy pick.

Stop being an herb, Jedi!

Holla back, ya'll...

Vote here!

:) 01-12-04 05:47 PM

lol... funny how you talk shit in my battles.. im a have to battle your ass real soon your startin to piss me off.. uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. ........

:) 01-12-04 05:59 PM

upping again............................................. .................................................. ..............


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