1st Freestyle,soo hot.
itz the take over/
nigga tha breaks ova/ i flow so long u can turn ur tapes ova/ halo soldier u dont want it wit rich, so u betta pump ya breaks/ before u get punched in your face/ wit heat like the projects tha watch is froze/ and there's four burners on me like the top of tha stove/ plus my pockets is swole/ im bout to throw rocks in my lobe/ niggas will bet on your life and pocket your soul/ your like a calendar, your days are numbered/ if i drop and niggas fall then the wait is december/ i done cut off niggas heads and left 2 basterds outlined/ how u floss when you copt your trash from outside/ niggas is hatin on me because they wack/ make like a lazyboy, recline and fall back/ |
gimme some feedback
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shit was hot fam..........
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nice opening and closing..consistent flo...u got potential for tha future and present..good structure too..i can hear u spittin that out loud
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thanx everybody, keep all your stuff comin too.
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better than i can do...so its tight hah
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shit was hot keep doin yo thing and who knowz
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Luvin tha wordplay....Hating the structure.
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