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J. Luth 04-22-05 09:01 AM

Mike Lowery vs Solo
 
Battle Rules:

10-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-25-05 at 09:01 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 04-22-05 09:04 AM

SoLo has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 09:04 AM.

System 04-22-05 09:08 AM

Mike Lowery has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 09:08 AM.

King Solo 04-22-05 12:38 PM

Battle Solo And Finally Ya Flowin Sumthin The Way I Got Ya Ass Sweatin…
Bad Boy 4 Life Huh!?!?
Ain’t U The Guy Who Couldn’t Show On RV Cuz His Mom Wouldn’t Let Him…
As An Unborn Child U Were Feelin Me..I Used To Take Ya Mom And Beat Her…
Now We Years Ahead..I’m A Big Game Hunter About To Murder This Cheetah…(cheater)
The Bad Boyz…Bitch On Ya Own Ya Just One Half Of A Duet Of Fake Vets…
Ride Together..Die Together!! Correct Cuz Ya Got Killed By Me & Lay-Text…
^^U Remember..Ironic That It Was The Police Mike & Marcus Gettin 5-0’ed…
Want Me 1-on-1 Hopin To Get My Dick..Mike Knows I’m Known To Ride Hoez…
Leave Ya Bloody, I Ain’t Got A Scratch..Its Clear Who Is Doin The Most Fightin…
Fight Me! I Killed This Dude Already..Now Ya Know Why He’s Been Ghost Writin…
Face It Ya Wack.. Mike U Suck More Than When Ya Got A Dick In Ya Mouth…
Ya Loss Has Been Scripted..Now I’ll Execute It With Just A Click Of My Mouse…



*If ya need explanations to get my personals then don't bother voting on this!!!*

J. Luth 04-22-05 01:35 PM

peep how his username spelt and capped and shit. That's all you need to kno before you read:


I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"
His rhymes are all fake, but... if you knew him well...
You wouldn't be suprised, I mean, his Queen is DML
This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!
If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"
You never spit hard, you spit it soft, I'll snap your spine
And Your Verse Has More Ups And Downs, Than The Way You Cap Your Lines
This battle gonna end, jus like my name, if you can spell
Cuz.........SP.................................... ..U get the L

J. Luth 04-22-05 01:56 PM

upppppppppppppp................................... ..................

King Solo 04-22-05 02:04 PM

..................................*bump*.......... .......................

J. Luth 04-22-05 02:15 PM

................................*hump*............ .................................................. .......................

King Solo 04-22-05 04:36 PM

............................*fuckin humpin this shit to*..............................

J. Luth 04-23-05 12:05 AM

.................................................. .................................................. ................................

Plutonium 04-23-05 12:16 AM

Voted For: Mike Lowery

Battle Solo And Finally Ya Flowin Sumthin The Way I Got Ya Ass Sweatin…
Bad Boy 4 Life Huh!?!?
Ain’t U The Guy Who Couldn’t Show On RV Cuz His Mom Wouldn’t Let Him…
^^^wayyyyyyyyy toooooo stretttchhhhed, not a bad personal though...
As An Unborn Child U Were Feelin Me..I Used To Take Ya Mom And Beat Her…
Now We Years Ahead..I’m A Big Game Hunter About To Murder This Cheetah…(cheater)
^^^nice....because it's true lol
The Bad Boyz…Bitch On Ya Own Ya Just One Half Of A Duet Of Fake Vets…
Ride Together..Die Together!! Correct Cuz Ya Got Killed By Me & Lay-Text…
^^^wack
^^U Remember..Ironic That It Was The Police Mike & Marcus Gettin 5-0’ed…
Want Me 1-on-1 Hopin To Get My Dick..Mike Knows I’m Known To Ride Hoez…
^^^first line was good, 2nd line not a punch
Leave Ya Bloody, I Ain’t Got A Scratch..Its Clear Who Is Doin The Most Fightin…
Fight Me! I Killed This Dude Already..Now Ya Know Why He’s Been Ghost Writin…
^^^aight...
Face It Ya Wack.. Mike U Suck More Than When Ya Got A Dick In Ya Mouth…
Ya Loss Has Been Scripted..Now I’ll Execute It With Just A Click Of My Mouse…
^^^wack man...played punch

I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"
^^^decent...
His rhymes are all fake, but... if you knew him well...
You wouldn't be suprised, I mean, his Queen is DML
^^^nice personal with the link
This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!
^^^another nice personal
If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"
^^^nice here with the play of his name
You never spit hard, you spit it soft, I'll snap your spine
And Your Verse Has More Ups And Downs, Than The Way You Cap Your Lines
^^^not feeling the caps, but overall decent
This battle gonna end, jus like my name, if you can spell
Cuz.........SP.................................... ..U get the L
^^^decent closer

Overall Mike takes this simply because his punches were hitting harder and flows better as well, solo had some multis, but it obviously wasn't good enough to beat Mike's consistency of punches and personals. This was a close battle but I think Mike edged out by a bit.

Overall vote: Mike Lowery

King Solo 04-23-05 08:22 AM

ok i'll accept that vote but god, people are sum fuckin idiots they keep sayin i aint usin personals...................i've got personals in every bar apart from the closer.

and that opener aint stretched, that bit in the middle is just a statement that makes the 2nd line make more sense............lot of ppl do that including R-Rated............

but wateva.......................uppin this bitch

B. Magik 04-23-05 09:20 AM

Voted For: SoLo

Hmm this was kinda close...

SoLo:

I was feelin ya verse...You had some creative punches that all hit pretty hard...Nothin was played out, which I like, and I liked the little multies at the end of lost of the rhymes...You could've made them a bit more complex, but they were still pretty good. You also had some good personals...LMAO at the one about his mama...lol...I liked that...All your shit flowed right because your structure was damn near perfect to me. Your closer couldve been a bit better, but it was iight.

Mike Lowery:

Your opener was weak to me. The punch wasnt that good or creative...Try making your punches more complex...However, you did have a couple of lines that made me say "damn"...I loved the one about him capatilizing the L in his name...Good shit there...And I also liked the one where you talk about the ups and downs in his verse...very creative punch, and I thought it was hot. However, that was pretty much all I saw in your verse that I liked, so I'm giving this to SoLo...No hate, good battle yall...

BkBrawla 04-23-05 10:17 AM

This was feedback posted for SoLo
 
Meh nice battle here, g-luck solo and mike on the polls

Armada Da 187 04-23-05 11:27 AM

Voted For: SoLo

voted for solo

solo gets the vote due to harder punches and personals

solo
punches- hard hittin n very creative
personals- creative
strucutre- nice strucutre easy to stick with
flow- was on point very nice

i loved this line:
Battle Solo And Finally Ya Flowin Sumthin The Way I Got Ya Ass Sweatin…
Bad Boy 4 Life Huh!?!?
Ain’t U The Guy Who Couldn’t Show On RV Cuz His Mom Wouldn’t Let Him…
(creative, nice punch tied wit a personal)

tight verse fam didnt see many multies to get some of those in ya verses

Mike
punches- nice but not as hard hittin so a lil basic
strucutre- nice and easy to read
personals- didnt really se any man elevate on them

i liked this line:
I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"
(creative lol i was chucklin)

flow ya flow was nice n easy to keep with

ya punches wernt hittin hard enuff man elevate on hard punches n get some multies in ya verse

good battle fams

RTF
linl below sig


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