Barz&Penstripes vs JRoy
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
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No Recycling
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Closed - Expired / old battle win

JRoy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-05 11:41 PM.

Barz&Penstripes has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-05 11:42 PM.

Look at this bitch bet he cant wait ta get dissed on
if i'm r.kelly then hes the bitch i pissed on

his writing technique u know i know its boring and dull
go head git hot n red cuz i come strong like a bull*

i spit fire kinda like the dude in my sig i'm flaming hot
i got fiending for more and you fiending for cock

you just joined this site and you expect something frail
like x's ill leave you 'crossed' like my female boss caught gittin nailed**

well i'm young and i'm ready too buck if ya'll dont let me in***
Problay gonna set me up like how much rv money u want too let me win

and u the type too say shit then go hide behind ya man
well you like a 'wall' to this artist with gunz as spray cans

wtf was the point of this battle for you too face prime embarssment?
i'll jack ya chain like the trix bunny sept you be sayin "where my carrots when?"****

*bulls git heated at red and trample ne thing in they paths
**jesus was on the cross and he was nailed too it
***Young Buck - Let Me In???
****That trix bunny gets jacked for his trix and he alwasy say where did my trix go or sum shit....

quick shit

This dude is ass heard yah on soundclick you're trash
Grab a gun shoot yourself make the bullet sound click yah last
Thing you ever hear make it so you were never here
Like peter ur punches will Never Land Like Bone I never fear
JRoy or JayKing doped up on crunk juice sucking lil JOns
Knock this fag Ta-Coma's make his heart whisper Psalms/song
Now what the fuck yah on besides dick when you rhyme
Is it Paul Wall today or Mike Jones tipping on the slide
Pro Flows no a quick proquo for yo ass and partners be
I'll eat yah like Dr. Lector with a nice cayente and farva beans
Do you produce a lil bitch like Missy out there losing control
I rather rhyme to yah heart beat fading crushing a microphone
Grabbing my bozack while this bitch stare jocking my limp
J you a bitch unlike Com you make it easy outside for a pimp


Peace lol

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Voted For: JRoy

Opener: JRoy
Closer: JRoy
Flow: JRoy
Multis: JRoy
Punches: JRoy
Personals: Barz
c0mplexity: JRoy

Vote ~0> JRoy

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Voted For: JRoy

he took it

What type of critiques are these!? uppin for votes!

Voted For: Barz&Penstripes

This dude is ass heard yah on soundclick you're trash
Grab a gun shoot yourself make the bullet sound click yah last
4..hmm..didn't like how u said soundclick twice..made it sound awkword
Thing you ever hear make it so you were never here
Like peter ur punches will Never Land Like Bone I never fear
3...seemed to self glorify IMO..
JRoy or JayKing doped up on crunk juice sucking lil JOns
Knock this fag Ta-Coma's make his heart whisper Psalms/song
6...good concept for punch..nice
Now what the fuck yah on besides dick when you rhyme
Is it Paul Wall today or Mike Jones tipping on the slide
5..2nd line wuz str8..but 1st wasn't as gay lines are played
Pro Flows no a quick proquo for yo ass and partners be
I'll eat yah like Dr. Lector with a nice cayente and farva beans
4..not much of a punch that dissed..
Do you produce a lil bitch like Missy out there losing control
I rather rhyme to yah heart beat fading crushing a microphone
5...1st line str8..wuz't feelin 2nd one
Grabbing my bozack while this bitch stare jocking my limp
J you a bitch unlike Com you make it easy outside for a pimp
6...kool...

Look at this bitch bet he cant wait ta get dissed on
if i'm r.kelly then hes the bitch i pissed on
3...played
his writing technique u know i know its boring and dull
go head git hot n red cuz i come strong like a bull*
5....decent...
i spit fire kinda like the dude in my sig i'm flaming hot
i got fiending for more and you fiending for cock
3...gay is played n had self glorifing
you just joined this site and you expect something frail
like x's ill leave you 'crossed' like my female boss caught gittin nailed**
4..pssh...ain't feelin it much
well i'm young and i'm ready too buck if ya'll dont let me in***
Problay gonna set me up like how much rv money u want too let me win
4...weak...weak..weak
and u the type too say shit then go hide behind ya man
well you like a 'wall' to this artist with gunz as spray cans
3..self glorifing
wtf was the point of this battle for you too face prime embarssment?
i'll jack ya chain like the trix bunny sept you be sayin "where my carrots when?"****
4..wtf...lol..it's tricks are for kids..not where my tricks go..and c'mon..ur concept is trix?

Barz n pen stripes got this...
JRoy...first..don't type ya shit like that.Don't split the bars up with a space between it.And u didn't have to explain all that shit.I thought a lot of ur lines..like the bull one..n wall/spray were self glorifing.When you should be dissing.And that last bar...the saying isn't "where my trix go".

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