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L.E 08-29-05 02:25 PM

King Solo Vs. R-Rated
 
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Topic: Dictatorship

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Restricted 08-30-05 08:30 PM

Checkin In.

~R~

King Solo 08-30-05 08:32 PM

checking in........interesting topic


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King Solo 08-30-05 09:11 PM

.......meh, 24 lines on this shizzle.......


The world fights through a war, subjugated to violence and more
Destruction brings on its fall, who will lead us, only few answer the call
Those who rise to power, sitting atop a commanding tower
The ones to make tough decisions as the planet steps to its final hour
The world is torn, factions are formed, and destructive alliances are born
Through the rise of enemies, leaders sit alone, roses amongst thorns
People question and ask, pressuring leaders, “Are they up to the task?”
Putting on a brave mask, the leaders hold futures within their grasp
Day by day a decision is made, orders are given and actions are played
And the leaders sit and wonder, “Is today the day I fall before the blade?”
The planet slowly dies, leader’s ears pierced by the deafening cries,
Leaders produce false thoughts of hope, imparting wisdom of lies
They hide behind a hopeful disguise as they see the fall of the skies
Soaring down upon them, the pressure of leading completes their demise
They deliver stacks of commands that bring death to the lands
From failure of plans the blood of the dead soaks all over their hands
And still they proceed, through each choice made they continue to bleed
Pouring their lives into their work, they go on and continue to lead
To their future they are blind; they picture scenarios through their mind
Be it good, be it bad, they know that it is their future alone to design
It is left to them alone to take the world away from the pain and the strife
To lead the people they dictate to their hopes of a peaceful life
Even if deep down inside, they are not clouded to what lies behind
The gateway to the future, a world where everything has withered and died.

Dervla 09-03-05 08:26 AM

King Solo vote and leave 3 Links.

DQ 09-03-05 09:03 AM

A nice conscious drop by you right here...

The topic allowed you to took many approaches, yours might not have been the most original one but you managed to write an insightful piece. The vocabulary was excellent in my opinion, flow was right on as well. Strongest aspect was the sort of conscious emotion, a kind of wisdom you delivered in fact. You also used some clear pictures to describe everything but the emotion of the story and such was the best in my opinion.

Keep it up

King Solo 09-03-05 09:47 AM

what about my dope ass multies all the way through, hhhmmmmm.....

Crazy Hades 09-03-05 11:39 AM

King Solo advances...yeah, this is like a way to get open mic views. <<


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