The Black Plague vs MaRVJay1009
 

Battle Rules:

14-16 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

My bad about the other 2 battles.. this one is the rite one

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-17-05 at 04:57 PM

Must drop verse in 3000 minutes after check in.

aight im waitin 4 u fam

Waitin for me? I'l accept when u get back online

The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 08:14 PM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 01:39 AM.

dont waste ya time makin new songs,u been waitin 2 long!..
talk shit i bet ya block sound like "2 days be4 you was born"*
u wanna c me traped in shackles,cuzz i know y fags attack u..
rv dis fukin "FRUiT" done had alot of dicks in his "adams-APPLE"
so chill hoe...u dont have a ill flow..ur "fake" but "Real" slow...
yeah u can buy a "plastic-dick" but u'll neva get a "deal-tho"..
dis bitch a neva be betta tha me F how sick dis BROaD pen is.
10 wins still dis dirty "bumm sleepin on me" like "park benches"
ya not on my level stupid dis dude jay is just servin you....
use ya writtens i'll "cum off da top" like "tupa's in convertibles"
i'll murda you so why you goin at dis kidd i do hurt dreams....
u winnin? umm no only time u'll "OWN-MJ" its dem "NEW 13'S"
it aint a thing homes!..back up from da KiNGS THRONE!....
cuzz black u couldn't "CELL"*sell* spittin off a "RiNGTONE"..
my raps just torchin him punches dont land cuzz dis fags is forcin em
only time u'll "DROP a single" is in "chruch" when they "pass da offerin"

nuff said.....

explinations....
*my first bar his birthday is july 6th...and july 4th is 2 days be4 it..u'll get da line

ppl pleez explain ya votes

All these wins you got like shootin heroin up in ya jugular..it gets to ya head quick
But ya errogance is ignorant, shows you just “hard headed” like a lead-dick
Yea ya perfect record nice, but all ya wins came against wack lames like you
Its unfair, like puttin mini-me and simon birch vs. MJ and shaq in games of 2 on 2
Just look at cats you battle... proud cuz you gonna beat "the wackest MC"?
We "established" you havn't got balls to beat peeps ya own caliber, cuz you losin to me*
My punches hit like tsunamis…. Ya face was a beach I’l throw 1 to the shore
Since ya moms only had ya wack ass to give me a win, I guess I owe 1 to the whore
Ya pathetic personals are pitiful, bringin em is pointless, like piss hole contraceptives
You tom cruise and this your “mission impossible”… cuz winnin is ya objective
Dropped my verse now you foldin under the pressure, like a bad poker hand
Chewed u up and spit you out…this battles like Lil Fips rap game..its over man
You wack, lackin skills, talent is absent..you more herbish than snoops pocket
Didn’t come hard enuff got dropped like the franchise from the Houston Rockets
Ya fear growin like rogaine, face burnin like propaine.. But you earned it yaself
Dumb idea to hit accept.. Call you kurt cobaine cuz you murdered yaself

*He battlin "thewackestmc" and his crew named "the establishment"

uppin 4 some more votes ppl

This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
 

checkin polls........................................

Voted For: The Black Plague

iight I gotta give this to blackplague is verse was a lil betta...

Blackplague: Alright for one man your verse was to stretch, but ya verse didnt fall apart which gave you the win you're flow was consistant and you had good simili's in this you're punches were hiting hard and you're vocabulary was much betta than marv your personals were good searched it well you're openore was good and I liked ya closer even though the concept is plain you made it sound good on the account on the wordplay you used on it...overall good verse.

Marv: ok you're verse was ok not as good yet ok you fell off sometime like u were doin good until u met the mj and the 13 line which was just wack, you're wordplay was bad cuz I couldnt quite catch any flow to it...you gad some good punches and only one good personal which was you openor and you're closer was also good which was a good and I liked it but you're whole verse wasnt as enjoyable and u fell of sometimes which made u loose at the end...overall good verse...but not as good as black plague.

votes..............Black Plague

Vote removed.. alias backlisted

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Wow Marv Reachin Hotshh Level Kid Iss Nice....
Openor=Marv,Good Punch And Personal Shit Wass Hott
Strukture=Tie,Both Yall Shit Wass Easy Ta Read
Personals=Tie,You Both Had 1 Personal
Punches=Off Tha Back Marv,His Shit Wass Hot And They Hit Hard
Vokab=Tha Black Plague,Had Better Vokab Up Ya Vokab Both Yall
Wordplay=Marv All His Lines Had Somethin Ta Do With Tha Punch
Multies=Marv,Damn Tha Multies Wass Hot
Closer=Tha Black Plague,Marv Ya Shit Aint Rhyme AT Tha End

Overall Marv Took Thiss Hiss Punches Wass Hittin Like Hell An Ok Personal Good Wordplay And Multies......

u wanna c me traped in shackles,cuzz i know y fags attack u..
rv dis fukin "FRUiT" done had alot of dicks in his "adams-APPLE"
^^^ Lol Shit Wass Mean As Hell

/V Marvjay1009 Rtf...................

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Uppin for some more votes... i will return the honest favor

uppin 4 more fukkin votes

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

checkin dem pollz..................................

uppin 4 more votes damm