Made a big mistake nephew (shiest diss)
number 1 calm down wanna be jeulz santana, bitch talkin slobk but he reppin a green bandana/ wtf?
Cuzz u cant handle this blasting, t'was a fairytale story gettin here.....but this is a beating u aint everlasting/ there aint no need to curse, but seriously u are the worst, im flippin off wacC concepts heres a middle finger for ya NGN diss verse/ ur cheesy enough to make a mouse all happy, shiest? kid ure too scared to shoot ur mouth off directly at me/ fuccin geek probly read books and bein a rapper ur faking, but on the real u obviously dont know how much of a beating ur taking/ fuccin faggot now look what u did u got me in this beef talkin shit bout Crips son u dont wanna fucC wid me im tellin u dat right now ~1~ http://community.rapverse.com/showt...15&page=2&pp=15 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3105650 |
ur cheesy enough to make a mouse all happy, shiest? kid ure too scared to shoot ur mouth off directly at me/
That flowed nice^ |
But the rest was enough to fill my garbage bin....
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Huh....................
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kid i aint droppin my good shit until i see decent shit come out u cause all ya shit is wacC son fa real
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ur cheesy enough to make a mouse all happy, shiest? kid ure too scared to shoot ur mouth off directly at me/
^^^ was awfull man....one hell of a poorly worded, uncreative punch....lame....you lines r to long....they wouldnt flow at all on a beat...ur vocab is lame at best...ur uncreative...bars w set up awkward..rhyme scheme is nonexsistant .....AND u act like it's good...AND its like four bars....of trash............. YOU sir,,,SUCK |
dog i could write a hell of alot better shit than this anyday but why waste it on this kid
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Naw u Really Couldnt Faggot
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his was wack, and thisd is on the same level.
yeh, elevate, quick! |
Kilo i'll fuccin tear u up u bitch gotta come to RV to start shit u got it commin to ya now
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Wow, I could write better bars in my fucking sleep.
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^ me to..lol
i dont see why people are still reading this..its ..WACK! |
^Word. I agree, work on your rhyme scheme/flow/punchlines/personals. Till then...
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instead of talkin shit LM and nicc why dont u leave decent fuccin feed like dude up hurr^^^
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Well ..you need to work on EVERYTHING go back to the basics man..
It's lacking anything interesting... the lines are all just braggo/gangsta shit that has no appeal in text...go back and work on multi's, complexity, punches, all of that...then talk shit to me..slut |
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