Jae Gutter vs popa doc
 

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yo gai gutter has got an embarassingly big stutter/
he's a mutha fuckin sissy, n his raps are like essays/
this rapper has gone rusty inside, needs to be referbished/
i'll rip your tongue wrapped in a com dom, blown away/
pop your ass with 9 magnum hang gun, that i carry all day/
im gonna slice you in 2 like a pinapple cut in the middle of the centre/
this' rappers a joke, i got any excuse to poke fun at this dumass/
he'll problebly spend all day replying, cause that's what it takes cuz he lacks/
im like a energy resourse, i'll drain you till you faint/
well wat do ya know battles over, now watch dis boy startle/

Aight.. sum quick shit...

LIKE FLIP SAID, ITS 'GAME OVA' DOC... GUTTER IS GETTIN U DROPED..
U COULDN'T BE 'SAVED THIS TIME' IF U WENT TO A BANK AND DEPOSITED A CLOCK!//
IM MURDERIN THIS ROOK.. ITS A WRAP AND IN THA BOOKS..
JAE IS "SKINNIN' THIS CAT" QUICKER THEN CHINESE COOKS!//
IM RUTHLESS, SHITTIN ON HIM LIKE BIRDS.. MY VERSE IS RIPPIN THIS HERB...
MAKIN HIM 'FALL TO THA GUTTER' LIKE 'TRIPPIN ON CURBS!'//
I FLOW HARD LIKE THA MISSISSIPPI.. BREAK FACES IF THEY GETTIN LIPPY..
PUNCHLINES KNOCKIN U 'OFF BALANCE' LIKE U WAS GETTIN TIPSY!//


IM DONE.... DONT EVEN NEED FIVE BARS.. U GOT MURDERED KID...

Can We Please Get Some Votes... Anybody Can Vote Ya'll.... It Not Hard To See Who Took Tha W In This Battle... Vote Ppl

Damn Jae// Popa U Got Merked Homie// Jae Nice Punches// And Flowz

I Told Yall Was In Trouble// People Just Dont Listen

Lol.. Good Lookin.... But Yea... I Need More Votes.... Damn Ya'll Sum Lazy Asses...lol

Jae Gutter you did good son. nice verse, your punches were good. next time show more multiples.popa doc you did good but your verse was weak. u need to put more punches and multiples in your verses.

vote=Jae Gutter

gutta u win!! England is wack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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^^^^yo get da fukk off dis site dickhead and u not even from queens niggaz u from alaska

RETURN THE FAVOUR OR I'LL NEVER VOTE ON ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR BATTLES!!! LOL!!! KID'N http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...874#post1279874

Papa doc, your take'n this one, you had a consisten flow, with puches the whole way through.
Flow: 6/10
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 6/10
Metas: 5/10
Multies: 5/10
Wordplay: 5/10
Overall: 32/60

Jae not a good verse man, lacked punches and personals this is a battle if your gonna win you gotta come correct.

Flow: 5/10
Punches: 5/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 4/10
Multies: 3/10
Wordplay: 4/10
Overall: 27/60
Vote: Jae

gutter took this fast popa doc ur verse didnt even rhyme and had whack lines damn u need to work jae gutter- man u whipped his ass nice flow punches and shit

Jae-Nice spit........You came hard and weak with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and
metaphores..Balacance was ok.....just work on a few things and ya will be there......

Doc-Came kind of weak....Work on something structure was ok
but work on some thing.....Multies Definitly need more
work.....But keep elevatin and work on alot
of things
v/Jae
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124905

Return the fav

Gutta You Rip This Dude Alive. Not Even 10 Bars And Still Murked This Fool.
Puches Were Like Whoa!!!. Ur Wordpaly Was On Man.

Doc. Ya Vesres Made Sense But U Wasn't Punchin Dog. Ya Lines Didn't Rhyme Afata One Anotha

This Line Is The Best Ive Eva Seen From Ya:gutta

U Couldn't Be 'saved This Time' If U Went To A Bank And Deposited A Clock!//

My V/ Gutta