the kid nate vs Da Problem Child
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-05-08 at 03:55 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


DQ'ed... asking for votes

Da Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-08 03:56 PM.

the kid nate has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-08 04:34 PM.

heard your words and your words aint piff
sit back take a month to reword your shit
leave you in a hursh thats the worste i get
you get ripped quick of the first verse i spit
that hot verse i spit can make u melt
you a champ in the hood then imma take your belt
your best oppurtunity to wait for help
how niggas gna like u if u hate yourself
face yourself face me im raisin hell
imma keep killen rappers till im placed in jail
im a threat to the game better raise my belt
you a hungry mc well taste the shell
make it well...
bring heat and piston
all i need is 2 bars and im beatin this bitch dude
so i twist the metal the metal twist u
your chick got a dick that make you a sick dude..

i am a Problem ur just a kid who needz a father
he's da perfect example on why u shoudnt use cheap condums

he's a push over to rap battlez so he should expect this
got cascade gunz that will clean ya block like tetris

he wouldnt blow up if he was involved in a suicide bombing
this cat couldnt get his bills-up if his first name was chauncey

and coincedently, like billups i will leave him 0 - 1
then take care of the kid like he was my son

of course, and L to this nigga will deiliver
call me da giver, cuz this nigga wont have a flow if he jumped in the river

he iz still ceimen, itz no way he's a killer
his flow iz negative like a useless picture


2 min keystyle

KO! all day on this one iz nothin to me

DA PROBLEM CHILD

i typed my shit in like 1 minute and my flow is goin hard you are a little unorganized but tight punchlines...

we will see the results

be safe~

signed~
the kid nate

i kinda caught u resusing your shit u used that on me and that other nigga

Da Problem Child : i deliver an L to this fake fuck

Sonny Barz. vs Da Problem Child

check it out

~signed
the kid nate

cuz thaz my theme nigga iz to deliver u an L. iz not like itz a hard punch line of nothin, itz iz just a saying

Voted For: Da Problem Child

i dont wanna seem like i am on da problem's dick or nothin but I and every bodi else will see that he won this battle.

why?

CREATIVITY: D.PROBLEM
FLOW:T.K.NATE
PUNCHES:D.PROBLEM
PERSONAL:D.PROBLEM
WIN:D.PROBLEM

read his shit out loud its soo choppy then read mine...

all i gotta say is

just when you thought it was over
nate came back to snap like a cobra
see when i rap the track takes u over
so this child better strap more ammo then a solider
hold up your flows choppy dude fuck ur music
i leave u choped and screwed
if i see u on tv ill pop the tube
man you just signed up for a shot to lose
im to calm and cool
while this dudes not
beef pop off he is immagrating
like a milllion guats
you can be signed to the doc
and you still would flop
all your raps get a little to physical
stepping up to me i pound you to minerals
ill leave your ghost here to post like im spirtual
you cant hang the kid nate puts the fear in u
see me im one of a kind i finish verses before u finish one of ur lines
i think ahead
u take steps one of a time
thats why im a vet
and u just one of them guys
u be dumb if u tried
ill merk u till you dead
wake up in the ER surrounded by sugery beds
kid nap u place in my basment deserted for decs (decades)
the kid nate?
im sick minded people call me perverted instead
i come hard on the thread
taken care of this problem child
like i was nursery med.

This was feedback posted for the kid nate
 

checkin polllllllllll

Voted For: Da Problem Child


he wouldnt blow up if he was involved in a suicide bombing
this cat couldnt get his bills-up if his first name was chauncey

vs


nothing


v/DPC

thaz was up uppin for votez
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Voted For: Da Problem Child

damn this is a fucking weak battle. No offence at all to either of you, Im glad to see you both battling. But you both need to step your game up.

First of all, creativity is lacking, both of you need ot look outside the circle and come up with some creative punches and approaches ot your battles.

Secondly, learn to fucking spell correctly. The spelling in this is shamefull. Before you say it, yes it is a text verse, so spelling is important.

Structure, The Kid nate, your structure isnt too bad. When writing bars, keep out of syllables in your bar length, keep them the same. This makes for better reading, more smooth setups and better text flow.


The Kid nate, you have no standout punches, but you do win on structure and flow. You rverse came together alot better, but is lacking hard hitting punches and creativity.

Da Problem Child you have some seriously wack shit in your verse bro.
example:

i am a Problem ur just a kid who needz a father
he's da perfect example on why u shoudnt use cheap condums


That is a pointless opener bro and you shoul dof bounced into battle mode alot more solid than that.
You rflow is off, including that huge stretched and force3d punch.
Your punches are simple and not creative at all, you need to learn to set your punches up and then execute them to hit hard!!

You do win on the fact you do have punches in your verse, even if they are weak as fuck.

No hate, real talk.