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Daz vs Troop vs Premanition
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Battles Go Up Monday (Only Friday this time, starting after this week will be Mondays) Check In Due Wednesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Verses Due Friday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Voting Ends Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time 20 Lines Minimum 40 Lines Maximum No Biting No Recycling Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week Topic : Sacrifice for Success |
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Check Mate Bitch
*Nuff Said* |
Yeah.. Ive never done topical before..
So im probably going to no show.. Just sign me out or whatever.. I dont know why i signed in :confused: |
lol...
aight then its just troop vs prem peace |
wow...mem jus try the shit
Cant pussy out *Nuff Said* |
*cough* pussy *cough*
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k, koo, this is my checkin now then.....
. . n troop ....i consider you more a goldfish then a guppy.. . . get ya lines up boyzz |
Changed, Daz is replacing Mimesis
peace |
Feelings flooding intellect, brain suddenly in direct Thus collect the jigsaw pieces that my life dissect Wrecked but yet a hope prevails in a certain distance This one girls existence encourages a stern resistance For instance an addiction, true story turned fiction Anatomy plagued by drugs now involved in eviction Friction of relationship, thoughts position station wit Ovation sits as mind considers that her patience slips Educational opportunity, a chance that confuses me Key to a future, a commanding choice that abuses me Materialistic life with power to challenge the above Or struggle & strife, shared with a girl that you love Result to a dice, fate before my pride asks for advice Success comes at a price, importance of this sacrifice A painful decision, tears of joy? an emotional collision Vision an empty life of waste, heart caged in prison As I stand with mail, crooked shoulders tells a tale Mental exhaustion, looking frail, application to unveil Hearts ratio, pace greater, deposit letter in waste paper A sacrifice for success? yes, to see that face later |
My father told me son," it's OK to have ideals",
.but beliefs against your government still won't pay your bills. You can raise your fists and publicly resist but in the end corruption still exists. And no protest song will ever change the world. Everybody does exactly as they are told. In the end every man works for what is his. You can fight the world, but that's just the way it is. You're words are not meaningless to me, I feel their honesty but it's my life I gotta figure out for me. It's what I've always done not what I have become and I know the consequences that will come. And if I never reach the world or speak to people's souls it's a passion that will not die as I grow old. I stayed inschool, but this is what I choose to do it may not work for you but to myself I know I must be true. I am not afraid to stand right where I've stood. My beliefs they are unchanged because I believe they should. And I'll measure my success one word at a time. If the truth is spoken will I stand the test of time??? . lmao, werd i forgot bout this....i didnt take much time..im to busy.. |
The Burning Crosses sizzle Out them Chants start to Fade But the Halusenations.. of this Past Nation are still Played Upon my Exhausted Thinking Patterns focusing on Poverty That Transforms our Empty Pockets into Actions of Robbery The fight includes scratching and thriveing still not Surviving Realization Minority Placeings,Fame comes from Sur-Rhyming Inner Addictions for Perfection reside in my mind in Portions Selfish Reflections present the Oppurtunity to get Abortions Pride starts to Unify my Mind,until i Vow to deal with Satan Popularity is my Clarity,But refuse to accept it as Fate Then Refuseing to Miss my Circle of Success so i chose to Protest Against the Odds of God non - Foolishness Steadily ProJects Dealt with Bounced Checks,....Pawned those Silverish Chains In Order 2 Conceal a Mic,2 Reveal, Sequels for Glitterish Fame My stomach Growls,.Due to my cup being Heavely OverRunith Fantisized with Paying Studio Costs,In order to make Hundreths My Triumpth is just Enough,..to Cause me to Ban my very Own Please do not have Disgust in my Trust until i have finally Grown Into the Commercial Status of otha Rappers with the same Fate That Shared the Same Plate and Finished the Very ..same Page Of Eternity that Martin Luther the King eventually Experienced Attractions of Rec Deals...cannot be Bought at Ex Clearances Takes Pain and Gain to see through the Bluffings in order 2 Wins Smog of Popularity haults me as if i was a Dolphin without Fins My Pride starts to be Unified and Battle Crys scream out i Recond Similar trates of the Greats,Are shown in each and every Legend through every feelin of Brilliance that is Showcased in my Face In the End i still Lose...Maybe because that was jus my Race That i had to play Second Best under the Rest,Its not Finished But my Soul is now Tarnished...and my Last Breath is Diminished because Firey Flames , Ingulp my Veins and the the Rest Minor Setbacks yet i still thrive to Win and eventually Sub Stress But my Soul is allready Sold...And i still did not Experience Success |
wow, im am shocked, i hate troop and he did really good.. daz, yours was alright because i liked the vocabulary but that was about it, it had no rhythm at all and just i thought that you would do better, and premanition, you just tried to pack to much vocab in like the first 4 lines, it was just terrible, you tried to make it all complex but it made it look stupid, so work on that, but i think troop did really good in this one..
v- troop. |
yep wow..all 3 of these topicals sucked ass......
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No actually jus yours
Good Shit Prem *Nuff Said* |
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