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Magic5 08-01-05 02:51 PM

TrooP vs. Blackmage
 
8 Lines Minimum
(Agree on exact amount in your check ins)
Check Ins due Wednesday
Verses due Friday

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~Luciano~ 08-01-05 02:58 PM

Check Move Bitch............

PicturePerfect cant vote.....

he dont kno How 2 Judge a Verse..

Blackmage 08-01-05 03:47 PM

check............................................. ...

Blackmage 08-04-05 04:07 PM

I'm going 10

your a troop i'm an army of one, your win you'll see it gone
vets don't respect you, you must be the troop we sent to vietnam
I want a clean fight but dis trik's durty too bad he's not savy
I don't even think about it, lines like the caps in your avy
speaking of caps look at your name, well your rhymes aren't directly shit
no more talkin outta your ass, your RV's stik up kid
you can't hide behind the bushes my lines are nefarious
plus you already lost like your rhymes are Pro Kerry ous (precarious)
so no gettin out of this war cause we all know ya shit is worthless
nan votes for van goh cause we all see the picture perfect

good luck homie

~Luciano~ 08-04-05 05:25 PM

lol

im so not even gonna try

look

Ya Styles Pitty If Any..Really..Your Not Phat..Try Coppin Some Lard
Look Down? Last time u Were on "Tops" was Standin on an Nba Card
..Another Thing....Ya Jerkin ya Odds...So Maybe u should Tuck & Pull
Chamabana Illinois.B Relocate 2 the Chi cuz ya Punches are full of Bull
And You Fuckin up ya Chances....This a 10 Min Key..Not even a Fight
How can i see your Image........When u cant even spell ya Name Right
If you Aint get it..You Missed the "I" in BlackImage..I kno u aint Dissin?
Like Blind Six Year Olds in a Ball Game...All your Swings @ T are Missin
And Dont Pm me talkin Bout Congratulations..Well maybe u can After
True..You are a Lyrical Assassin
Because after you Killed Your Verse...I read it and Died from Laughter

Blah

N.Tavarez 08-04-05 06:23 PM

speaking of caps look at your name, well your rhymes aren't directly shit
no more talkin outta your ass, your RV's stik up kid
you can't hide behind the bushes my lines are nefarious
plus you already lost like your rhymes are Pro Kerry ous
THAT ONE WAS WORDED BAD BUT LIKED THE CONCEPT
VS
Ya Styles Pitty If Any..Really..Your Not Phat..Try Coppin Some Lard
Look Down? Last time u Were on "Tops" was Standin on an Nba Card
And Dont Pm me talkin Bout Congratulations..Well maybe u can After
True..You are a Lyrical Assassin
Because after you Killed Your Verse...I read it and Died from Laughter

troop ya verse was nice, somewhat stretched
mage yours wasnt but punches werent as hard

v/troop

MiSk 08-04-05 07:16 PM

Blackmage

Best line:
your a troop i'm an army of one, your win you'll see it gone
vets don't respect you, you must be the troop we sent to vietnam

Worst line:
I want a clean fight but dis trik's durty too bad he's not savy
I don't even think about it, lines like the caps in your avy

6/10 Wasnt feeling most of ya verse. punches were basic and the flow to it wasnt that good.... sorry man no hate


T.r.oo.P

Best line:
Ya Styles Pitty If Any..Really..Your Not Phat..Try Coppin Some Lard
Look Down? Last time u Were on "Tops" was Standin on an Nba Card

Worst line:
And Dont Pm me talkin Bout Congratulations..Well maybe u can After
True..You are a Lyrical Assassin
Because after you Killed Your Verse...I read it and Died from Laughter

8/10 Ya verse was pretty good. good concepts, a couple bars could of been a little better. flow was reall good.... good job man


Vote: T.r.oo.P

Cocaine 08-04-05 10:42 PM

speaking of caps look at your name, well your rhymes aren't directly shit
no more talkin outta your ass, your RV's stik up kid

VS.

Ya Styles Pitty If Any..Really..Your Not Phat..Try Coppin Some Lard
Look Down? Last time u Were on "Tops" was Standin on an Nba Card
If you Aint get it..You Missed the "I" in BlackImage..I kno u aint Dissin?
Like Blind Six Year Olds in a Ball Game...All your Swings @ T are Missin

Troops punches were just hitting harder v/troop

~Luciano~ 08-04-05 11:09 PM

3-0..................

Blackmage 08-05-05 01:19 AM

hey good shit Troop my shit was a 10 min key too, but i guess your 10 mins were just better huh lol

~Luciano~ 08-05-05 03:36 PM

Guess So........jus keep elevating cuz...dont give up man..

u got potential..

DoContinue 08-06-05 07:52 PM

troop gets this vote...
mage came wit some almost decent punches... nothing was really quoteable tho... nothin stood out
Troops verse was pretty good, he had a couple of nice punches giving him tha win...

If you Aint get it..You Missed the "I" in BlackImage..I kno u aint Dissin?
Like Blind Six Year Olds in a Ball Game...All your Swings @ T are Missin
And Dont Pm me talkin Bout Congratulations..Well maybe u can After
True..You are a Lyrical Assassin
Because after you Killed Your Verse...I read it and Died from Laughter
vs.
nothin...
V/ Troop for better punches and a hilarious closer

Typical 08-07-05 01:53 PM

black
ur shit was cool and i liked tryin to figure out ur word play,but i wasnt feelin the verse overall. good try

troop
2nd bar was good and the last two had me rollin never minding the wording
shit was funny. original spin on a played concept in the second bar...

Typical 08-07-05 01:54 PM

my bad

v/troop

Magic5 08-08-05 02:47 AM

TrooP wins by KO.
Blackmage loses.


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