young_one vs Lyric_RevelatioN
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no dick riding


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-09-04 at 02:32 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

young_one has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 02:32 AM.

u try to paint pictures sence u cant spit//
talent is waistless im gone wit time//
i make my flows one of a kind//
yea u a fakea i already seen em all do it like viagra//
make these bitches fall without viagra they wouldnt be hard//
im out on my postion playin my gaurd//
i ant even gotta move ill still be packin migh tbe still on my block but still be hackin//
no box yet a nigga would still be jackin//
these niggas are all gone cuz im the last left//
call my niggas to kill u but they call me bad breath//
im a dude that ull never see me spray my heat cuz ur all bitch like the nba//each time i ryme my glow seems to shyne bright n ur sight//
i glow for to the flow for the heavens up high icould walk up there walk upon the deads eyes n kiss the sky//
u may take a deep breath wit me cuz ur a waist of time like easy ink//

Lyric_RevelatioN has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 03:10 AM.

ill murder this young one in all sorts-a-ways
treat you like a used condom cum on you then throw you away

this young one wishes he was a young gun
the only thing youll never hear battlin me is 'young won'

talkin bout the young guns or the whole roc you cant be these guys
tryin to see my game youll find your usin stevie's eyes

the only way youll beat me is if i bitch out and no show
but im here now time to knock this bitch out wit no flow

youd have to recycle your best lines if you even had any
and get on everybodys dick for votes or get crew if you have any

this battle was practice since this nigga is so wack
you got beat by a rookie how do you face that?

This was feedback posted for Lyric_RevelatioN
 

lyrics is raw thats all im saying ...young one u need a coach or something

uppin for some votes..................................

This was feedback posted for young_one
 

young one you have very nice form, ur flow is good, good choice of words

Lyric got flow i got more caught up in his young one, you may be out done in this one..lyric is crusin for first win

iight iight thanks for the comment so whom u fanna vote for? n uppin for votes too

need some votes here uppin.........................................

Voted For: Lyric_RevelatioN

lyric came harder but ya both came weak,u both lacked in personals but lyric had a few about young guns name and well thats why he gets my vote and young one came with an aight flow but he came played with punches

Voted For: Lyric_RevelatioN

Lyric
Flow-Lyric
Punches-Lyric
Vocab-Lyric
Structure-None
Wordplay-None
Over All Lyric,s Verse Was Better

Voted For: Lyric_RevelatioN

I Dont Know what To Say But Damn

Young_one
Needed More Pucnhez Bcuz the Few N His Verse Werent Strong Enough To Take Down Lyric Revelation (no hate )
And Your Structure Was kinda Im Not Gonna Say Sloppy But It wasnt The Best That I Think You couldve Done

Lyric_revelation
Came Wit Harder Punchez Than Young And He Had Some nice Multis But Vocab Was Absent In This Verse And Personals Was Off Da chain Fo Dis Mayne
Thats All I HAve toi Say

A Mayne Can Yall Return The Favor and Vote In My Battles Especially Check Out The One Against Sierra Wireless (which I Tried Hard ) But Plz Check It out i MEan It Would B The Respective Thing To Do I MEan I Took the Time To Vote On Your Battle The least You Could Do Is Vote In Mines *Much Respect*
King~~Dipset

Voted For: Lyric_RevelatioN

^^a few lines played like the stevie's eyes one.. HOWEVER, u had the better flow as well as the better closer.. was funny as hell rofl..
the only way youll beat me is if i bitch out and no show
but im here now time to knock this bitch out wit no flow
^rofl... funny, but the first half was a lil' played.. people use that all the time, but u go him, u kept punches consistent and you had a good flow i would said add a few multis here and there and maybe a couple of metaphorz.. (those are the best) in my opinion.. but this was kinda one sided..
my vote/ Lyric Revelation... return the favor hit up my battle in my sig.. ;)