Call Me....track #2 on the mixtape
 

ha the song for the ladies...cuz you just gotta have one on every album, so the girls will buy it too....sad thing is its all free's, tried to write, but it just didnt sound the same so we kept it....any thoughts or suggestions....drop em...thanks

( http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2671705

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CALL ME - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3568370

upppin....feedback anyone?

no love on this track eh?....oh well
if no one gon send feed, one of yall can close it

since no1 else will elave feed i guess i will...

...to much talkin in the intro, sounds gay, jsut let the beat play in the beginning...you got potential, improve your ridin skills, sum of your flow is off...i dont kow if you first or second tho...
2nd guy, flow is also off in sum spots, good voice...yall both need some more emotion...i like the beat tho...lyrics are decent
3rd dude, also needs to fix flow, these lyrics arent as good as the other two verses...elevate and then drop some other trakks after you improve your flow...youll get better wit time

could ya rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223420

beat: decent...fits the theme of the track
flow: 1st cat...decent...2nd cat...decent...vocals need more highs...up quality
lyrics: nothing special either way...throw in a sick meta or two
overall: hackneyed and cliche...you didn't put a new spin on an old idea...decent...I can also hear your Cool Edit noise redux...

6/10