indeph vs c.a.l.i
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

OK LIL BOY I HAD ENOUGH TIME TO MOP THE FLOOR WITH YOUR BITCH ASS

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 01-11-05 at 03:09 AM

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Battle closed.. indeph possibly changed avatar while cali posted thread in LL that could be considered swaying

Indeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 03:21 AM.

C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 03:22 AM.

Fuck sublimals im gonna be simple and frank
Cuz ya alais aint a name...........its really ya rank!!(*708*)
Get too cocky and now you starting to brag
'Lifes a war on others'......so why you waving a white flag?!(avy)
Was undefeated only by resetting ya record lame
On ya block you never win.....you get jumped like checker games!!(1)
Please dont believe him the pretender
His 'class' furthest from the 'hood'......like strech Limo fenders(2)
Been owned you so this aint 'sunning'.... consider it 'dawn'
Thought he was deep got 'INDEPTH'....... then spelled it wrong!!




EXPLANATIONS
1-HE HAD A THREAD SAYING WHITE BOYS IN HIS NEIGHBORHOOD BE JUMPING HIM
2-IN THE LUXARY CAR CLASS NO CAR IS LONGER THEN THE STRECH LIMO THEREFORE FURTHEST FROM THE HOOD JUST LIKE HIM HE LIVES IN THE BURBS IN CHICAGO AND STAY FRONTING LIKE HE IN THE HOOD

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

ok in my opinion this was a pretty easy battle to choose from...........

Cali............
1st bar- nice personal...good opener....nice bar
2nd bar-another good personal.....hit decent
3rd bar-lol nice...liked the humor...hit very well
4th bar-nice concept....good bar...hit good
5th bar- yet another good personal...hit hard...


Indeph.......
1st bar-decent opener...it hit good...decent bar
2nd bar-hit ok...good personal...ok bar
3rd bar-good bar...hit good
4th bar-hmm decent...ok personal...not that great
5th bar-another decent bar....ok closer


basically cali won because of consistence and better personals.......calis whole verse was good....whereas indeph verse had some ups and downs........i felt that calis personals hit a whole lot better.....just and overall better drop by cali

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

C.A.L.I. - Good battle, your flow was good and you had hard hitten punches/personals.

best Line - Was undefeated only by resetting ya record lame
On ya block you never win.....you get jumped like checker games!!

Worst Line - NONE

Indeph - Good spit, it flowed well.. and you had some good punches.

Best Line - your not only confused what good is..but what your ethnic is
we saw yo pic..you white..you lie..and say you mexican..

Worst Line - I mean nigga..you not nigga..this fact you gotta figure..
you fat..don't gotta figure..yeah you litte..just not the middle..

OVERALL - Good battle here, both battlers came hard wit the flow and punches. I think Cali won this battle tho, he had the harder punches/personals. Indeph no hate, your shit was good too, I just felt cali more.

Vote - C.A.L.I.

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This was feedback posted for Indeph
 

damn this was a pretty decent battle........... CALI came pretty hard except for the last line....... and i think best line of the whole battle was indephs closer........ shit was TOO hot...... ofcourse i cant vote... but this should be decent.... Indeph seemed to have some lil Jay Z in em on this one with the flow

^no I Will Own Him And He Will Cry Later Upppppppppppppppppppppppppp For 3

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

okay break down both y'all my niggaz but i had 2 honestly vote on this shit

CALI - nice punchez sum of 'em ain't make sense 2 me but tha onez that did wuz nice i see u got a couple personalz they connected real eazy an i knew wut u wuz talkin bout don't really got vocab go couple multiz in there but not many work on that nah mean :thumbup: overall verse = 7/10

Indeph - u my knee grow but this battle wuz tha worst i seen from u in a long while wut happened homie none of ya shit connected it seem like u jus typed random sentencez come on man i kno u can do better then this i seen a lot better from u u had sum blah punchez a couple personalz a couple forced linez but damn man this tha weakest i seen from u overall verse = 5/10 :(

there it go like i said come on indeph u coulda had this....guess u had an off day but CALI nice verse an indeph stay up homie

Voted For: C.A.L.I

Indeph

your not only confused what good is..but what your ethnic is
we saw yo pic..you white..you lie..and say you mexican..
^content is good but could've worded shit better

you do this alot but I think you might be a man..
post slut..even with that watch you got no time on your hands..
^watch line is nice

I don't think you got a life..you lie and say you gotta wife?
you don't gotta lie..only you a mod..is if your life..you modify
^okay okay

I mean nigga..you not nigga..this fact you gotta figure..
you fat..don't gotta figure..yeah you litte..just not the middle..
^nah,doesn't do the trick

whats wrong with you..better yeah..a better quest is whats not..
you not hot..maybe hotheaded..so that mustof cause mirage..
^weak closer

Okay,vocab could've been slighty better, flow n structure were good. Had some good stuff in there but not really any *bam* hardhitting punches, verse had potential but you worded things in a less efficient way...expected more from this drop to be honest...


C.A.L.I

Fuck sublimals im gonna be simple and frank
Cuz ya alais aint a name...........its really ya rank!!(*708*)
^first line bleh, 2nd nice

Get too cocky and now you starting to brag
'Lifes a war on others'......so why you waving a white flag?!(avy)
^again first line bleh, 2nd cool

Was undefeated only by resetting ya record lame
On ya block you never win.....you get jumped like checker games!!(1)
^good one...

Please dont believe him the pretender
His 'class' furthest from the 'hood'......like strech Limo fenders(2)
^last line's funny

Been owned you so this aint 'sunning'.... consider it 'dawn'
Thought he was deep got 'INDEPTH'....... then spelled it wrong!!
^hehe,dope closer

Your drop was fire from beginning till ending, too bad you had some less first lines in there but other thn those,you had hardhitting punches n personals in there. Vocab,structure n flow were tight as well...Solid drop!

Voted For: C.A.L.I

hmm ok battle here structures were both alright not much complexity but indeph i feel you lacked on punches dawg thats why i gotta give this battle to cali he had some punches an personals an thats what a text battle is about both look rusty though but vote goes to cali