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WOOSHY 06-17-03 10:28 AM

the most complex rhyme EVER!!!!
 
This is my rap/
now b4 u say its crap/
listen to me rap/
Now i think women are easy/
very very sleazy/
All they scream is please me/
I shagged this girl who was blonde/
wen i had dun i thourght she was a pond/
just like MC hammer you cant touch this/
I write this now im stoned from smokin canibis/

tell me what u think complex aint it

GrYm StYlE 06-17-03 10:30 AM

COmplex No
Weak Yes
Dude elavate ya rymes and stop writing with crayons
10ne

Kapone 06-17-03 10:32 AM

lol@crayons

magic markers are good cuz ur ryhmes are forever <<thatscomplex

naw, i know u do better so i cant say nuthin, this was just a joke

i hope

The MRB 06-17-03 10:33 AM

OMG, if all my apllicatons wernt down starte away i would put this in RB legends. *kisses woosh's feet* man i gotta be on the remix, plz o partner in rhyme o buddy o pal plz dawg. damm that rhyme was so complex i nearly couldnt understand it
dope vocabulary
superb wordplay (like MC Hammer you can't touch this)
great rhymes
just the right length for me to get me head round.
damm im so lucky not only are u my partner in the business your also in my crew TLA, thank u for entering my life, u genius of the rap game

SIGN THIS BOY NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GrYm StYlE 06-17-03 10:35 AM

MRB
That shit was weak
are you serious
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
You WIll Never EVer sell a record
Atleast i dont think so

WOOSHY 06-17-03 10:35 AM

LMAO uppety upp & by the way i was stoned wen i written this give me some credit, otherwise ur all sackreligous

The MRB 06-17-03 10:37 AM

o yeh i forgot to mention the Eborted verdict
gess wot soony
its the first A* well done

inspire 06-17-03 10:39 AM

this was ill dawg... i loved it.. :rolleyes:

GrYm StYlE 06-17-03 10:39 AM

HUH?

The MRB 06-17-03 10:41 AM

K imma drop a lil verse for a cypher completly original of course

da woman in wooshy rhyme was blonde/
she was like a pond/
we can rap/
we aint crap/
fool u cant touch this/
i never smoked cannibis/
but i still get woman easy/
coz they is well sleazy/

damm woosh u got competition for best rapper on the site

yes me u wack ass punks

WOOSHY 06-17-03 10:41 AM

GRIEME I THINK WE ALL WORKED OU THAT THIS WAS RIP THE MPISS IM GONNA DISS U HOLD ON:
Gimie style/
one big pile/
of pure horse shit/
We all know he a fat git/
a fagot bitch who knows it/
Slit you throat & Diss you bit/
chuck you of the boat/
hope u dont stay a float/

Kapone 06-17-03 10:42 AM

yea, i agree, def illness

this really brings out the herb in your eyes.... hahaha

yall need to put this guy on aftermath

shit, ill do the puffy remix right now...

huh huh. bad boy

This is my rap/
now b4 u say its crap/
listen to me rap/

uh, yea

Now i think women are easy/
very very sleazy/
All they scream is please me/

uh huh

I shagged this girl who was blonde/
wen i had dun i thourght she was a pond/

bad boy, what?

just like MC hammer you cant touch this/
I write this now im stoned from smokin canibis/

we aint, go-n now where, we cannit be stopped now

bad boy, uh huh



damn, i think we got sumthin here

The MRB 06-17-03 10:44 AM

grime aint wicked he picks his nose/
he eats the crows/
he shags his mum/
up the bum/
he cant spray cum/
ALi G is coo but he aint/
he eats paint/
he wees his bed/
i shot him in the head/
wid my gun/
it was fun/
and im done

take that grimey uve jus bin served!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOOSHY 06-17-03 10:45 AM

LMAO

The MRB 06-17-03 10:45 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Kapone
yea, i agree, def illness

this really brings out the herb in your eyes.... hahaha

yall need to put this guy on aftermath

shit, ill do the puffy remix right now...

huh huh. bad boy

This is my rap/
now b4 u say its crap/
listen to me rap/

uh, yea

Now i think women are easy/
very very sleazy/
All they scream is please me/

uh huh

I shagged this girl who was blonde/
wen i had dun i thourght she was a pond/

bad boy, what?

just like MC hammer you cant touch this/
I write this now im stoned from smokin canibis/

we aint, go-n now where, we cannit be stopped now

bad boy, uh huh



damn, i think we got sumthin here


and i thought me and wooshy were good, we are but we gotta look up 2 kapones standards!


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