Export vs flow verse
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flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-08-05 05:41 PM.
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Export has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-08-05 05:41 PM.
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"Export," you got that right cause i'm about to "ship" you out of RV/
Cat even if you "elevated" your game and got "UPS" u still couldn't "deliver" a line that would impress me/ cat u cat rap so give up on the mic/ dog the "punches" are just like those at college parties "spiked"/ and even if you rhymes attracted "AIDS" they still wouldn't be "sick"/ and this battle is over cause like "paper mache" you've just been "ripped"/ |
I'm Quick to Slap This Newb That Simply has no clue
Like a Tattoo, This Loss is always gonna be stuck on you The Words that i Spit have Shredded-Yah-Credit Iam a Soilder, yah A Pussy NewsCaster Embedded Yah Rhyems ant Hot, they Colder then Jack Frost Only Blood yah spilled was a aids case at Red Cross This Ant Know Battle, Torture of No Prevention Pay attention, I dont follow the Geneva-Convention Study my words, Cause unlike Herbs, there Superb |
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come with the votes ppl-- lets get this over with . . .
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Voted For: flow verse
"Export," you got that right cause i'm about to "ship" you out of RV/ Cat even if you "elevated" your game and got "UPS" u still couldn't "deliver" a line that would impress me/ nice cat u cat rap so give up on the mic/ dog the "punches" are just like those at college parties "spiked"/ ok...like dat wordplay wit cat and dog and even if you rhymes attracted "AIDS" they still wouldn't be "sick"/ and this battle is over cause like "paper mache" you've just been "ripped"/ ok finisher Breakdown-kinda of a short verse but for that it was nice...only line that was an ok line was that college line...could have reworded it to make it hotter... Overal 7.5/10 I'm Quick to Slap This Newb That Simply has no clue Like a Tattoo, This Loss is always gonna be stuck on you elementary The Words that i Spit have Shredded-Yah-Credit Iam a Soilder, yah A Pussy NewsCaster Embedded ok Yah Rhyems ant Hot, they Colder then Jack Frost Only Blood yah spilled was a aids case at Red Cross ok This Ant Know Battle, Torture of No Prevention Pay attention, I dont follow the Geneva-Convention um...maybe Study my words, Cause unlike Herbs, there Superb no no Breakdown-verse was below par...kind of elementary if you ask me...put more thought into your rhymes and try to put in a lil more complexity...overa 3/10 |
thanks for the honesty and the vote . . . comon ppl lets get some more votes in . . . THANKS
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Voted For: Export
jus plain and simple ur verse is way better then flows in everything flow seriously [B]ELAVATE[B] |
comon ppl with the votes . . . please thanks
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This was feedback posted for Export
your a much newer kid than him.....Man this battle is Whack
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Dopium how does his vote count -- that is such a hate vote-- how is that enuff for a vote--- Ok watever. . . its all opinion i guess . . . just up the votes ppl . . . Thank you
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