threat
 

chorus or whatever the fuck its called..
im a lethal threat, it is i the one you met,
as i leave you all dead all for a bet

my fucking rap..
mother fucker, im the warlord,
calling your bitch a whore, whom do you adore?
ill slap that bitch and take her money
aint no joke this aint no funny
slapping you fags you cant be
cant be living so u rest in pee

lol @ da last 2 lines
flow was ok
was short
I suggest you elevate
work on VOCAB!
I think ur flow could of been better tho try lengthing ur bars

u probably dont even kno the difference between whack and dope
I think dis piece fits in whack

wow, you guys criticism sure is constructive... lol

I guess he deserved it for thinkin he was the shit... but...

ELEVATE!!!!!!! u need to work on flow and vocab... go read some other stuff see how other mcs do it.

you now: :help:

you after elevation:: :hump:

see?