illuson vs Mc_BaD_bOy
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-08-04 at 10:22 AM

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DQ'ed for going over line limit

Mc_BaD_bOy has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-04 10:23 AM.

u look like the backside of a camel licking ass of a 10foot a mammal
ur a dick without no head so u a dick no headed camel

ur worse dan jacko u was born to be a wacko
man u ass fuck ur mam like a lacko

smak ya knock ur jaw out u do to much buming about
ill kill u with out a dout shot u in da head beyond any doubt

illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-04 10:12 PM.

mommy im a 'bad boy' i need to be spanked
my words pierce u and cause pain like ya spine was shanked/

my words r faster then a porsche
make u dissaper like advertisment in the source/

ya better watch who u beef wiith
cause ill turn PUFFY and u lose B.I.G/

ill stab u with a switch blade then mix tape
im in DA BAND cause i rhyme SHYNE BIG plus i spit MA$E/

ya rhymes get laughed at u belive u rapper
ull get thrown away like a gum wrapper/

have u runin n hidin ull be dressin in a dress like denise rodman
then u wonder why people ignore u like ya ass wasnt even talkin/

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppin for votes
ill return the favor

uppin............................................. ......................

uppin............................................. ..............
dont sleep

Voted For: illuson

lol wow..
MC BAD Boy..wtf happened?
WOW..
illuson u have one good punchline so ur gettin the vote, cause MC BAD BOY had none.

Structure weak..
vocab-weak

v/illuson

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i wasnt feeling well or well
ill get over it.........

uppin............................................. ..........

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp in 4 votes ill return the favor

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppin for votes
dony sleep one this

This was feedback posted for illuson
 

GOT IT TWISTED FREESTYLE BY D12
THIS IS PROOF'S RHYME
'ill stab u with a switch blade then mix tape
im in DA BAND cause i rhyme SHYNE BIG plus i spit MA$E'

ILLUSON BITES

uppin............................................. .