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C-Bo 11-07-04 11:53 PM

Anatomical Destruction
 
Cs raw now, have ya 'eatin brains' for bein a 'smart mouth',
n spill blood from ya arteries so u can pour ya heart out,
c'mere son, its like ya eyes have legs when i make ya tears run,
fa real dun.. u won't be hearin bass cuz i busted ya ear drums,
nga quit it, cuz like a teachers salary ya figures frigid,
n i'm not crunchin numbers when i 'smash' ya finger 'digits',
rippin u slut, make ya flinch n for every blink u get cut,
slash ya sack n put it on ya forehead for thinkin ur nuts,
u punks hide, C feedin u this heat to leave ya lungs fried,
so don't try, cuz i'll tie knots in ya mouth n leave ya tongue tied

Loveliss Grandz 11-08-04 09:47 AM

yeah C.feelin this...........short but sweet and funny too........
8/10.keep em comin'

intensify effect 11-08-04 10:49 AM

yea i was feeling this as-well a few good puches, smoth flow and shrt N sweet cool,

8.3 outta 10

C-Bo 11-09-04 01:10 AM

thanx......uppin

¤ÐÅž¤ 11-09-04 02:29 AM

it was aight....a lil longer wouldve been better though..
.....7.5/10....<

C-Bo 11-09-04 11:38 PM

thanx................................uppin

Chew187 11-10-04 07:10 AM

8/10 short but sweet :laugh: nice Drop C-man

LyRi-CaLi 11-10-04 01:23 PM

Damn C-Bo you drop like your a straight killer.....even your audio is audio.....I enjoyed reading this piece just thought some of vocab was to basic......other then that nice wordplay nice multis and some nice verses(sick)

Keep it up

LyRi-CaLi 11-10-04 01:23 PM

COrrect up top "even your audio is sick"sorry about that.............

Blunt Rapper 12-09-04 01:16 PM

it good but you could do better, i heard your other shit


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