Lord Lucifer Vs. ToddisMe
 

Due Tommorrow...
30 lines max
No Hate/No Dick Riden/No Crew
First ta 5

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little brat, dont come back, after the voters say that i beat yo ass
you dumb with no class, got an ass made of glass
tellin u i aint gay, so dont make a pass
you fag, you got no guts, so stay off of the agro crag
ur worthless like a dollar to bill gates
i aint worried about a thing, just look at these lopsided stakes
me vs you, you might as well glue your mouth shut
like king tut, stay locked away in a dirty hut
where you belong, i guess im wrong
cause you dont belong, like george bush on top of a throne
you prone to gettin dissed, before being born your mom prayed she was takin a piss
cause she knew yo daddy missed with his little soldier
yo mom felt it like a boulder, hitting her in the head nobody could console her
she knew her life was over, sorta like this battle
first day you was born she handed you a poison rattle
die baby die, i cant take how much you suck
i shouldna fucked, but i was drunk,
and now im stuck with this joke of kid
have no choice, but i wished it could be
that i have a master child like toddisme
i guess u must be blind cause you can see whats pending
better go to lens crafters get you some contact lenses
with 20 20 vision i see where you went wrong
it was when you typed in your name and logged on
if death awaits me, at least i aint goin to hell
for being as lame as sending e mail through AOL
thanks for lettin me kill you, little bitch
sent yo ass up to space to hang with lilo and stitch

WORD

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who's tha ruler of this site?--when I--manifest it's lethal/1
yo chances of winnin are 'slimmer'--than a 'Group of Anorexic People'/2
don't even check tha sequel--fake ass rapper--bitch juss acts street/3
I been 'Crowned more times' than--kids wit 'bad teeth'/4
peeps think he has me--fuck no I'll never--lose again/5
tasted it before--decided I'd rather--choose to win/6
ya'll new I'd do this shit--sorry ToddisMe hate to--hurt a smart guy/7
computer nerd--doesn't care if u hurt him--juss don't--merk his hard drive/8 haha
yo call my flow phantom--cuz it makes ya eyes squint--just wait till ur face~gets~soothed/9
this aint a battle--im just gonna lace~this~dude with different stages of matrix~moves/10 damn...
ToddisMe is scared of an open-mic--he's so wack he's getting called an amateur on karaoke~night/11
u think im joking~right?--u couldnt touch 'gold' at the arcades free 'token~night'/12 lol
Cocky as the president--in reality juss--the burger king/13
More gassed then whoever told--Pharrell that he could sing/14
beat him? i'm able and willing--bumpin in tha hood ain't even turned tha--amp on/15
I'll leave this 'pussy bloodied'--somebody get em a 'tampon'/16 lol
get my laugh on--cause if u actin hard--u gettin smacked and scarred/17
'my flows priceless'--for everything else there's--'Mastercard'/18 D

k truth is: the lord lucifer merked toddisme. Todd, u went off topic...focus more on directly punching your opponent. Be agressive next time!!! and make sure your flow is on key.....do that by rapping your verses out loud before you submit them

Lord lucifer ur shit as good...shows u got talent..but that anorexic line was mad played....u sstill had some tight creative shit tho. u just came more complex and expereicned with your verse

my vote: lord