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3. -Troublesome- (2-0) vs. 4. Sureloc Holmes (3-1)
G.B.A Gimmick Battle Association War Battles War on Terrorism: United States vs. Middle East ============ -Troublesome- as United States vs. Sureloc Holmes as Middle East ============ Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific 10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit Biting = Ban Feeding = -2 Votes Swaying = DQ Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links Votes Due Wednesday Night New Battles Up Thursday Morning For Full Rules Click Here |
16-20...............
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16-20 is cool with me. this should be interesting.
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Me needs extension.
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me too, lol.....
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your fuckin' country is run by a whore, look
advice... don't ever 'raq your brain or you'll end up like George Bush an illiterate fuck, my stand is offish how can more than half the country hate em and he still be in office? most powerful?...HA! ya fuckin' shit soft the vice president could run it better... but we all know that George just blew Dick off and plus ya daughters is famous? this is like a glocks spill i thought acting like a dumbass to get on TV only worked for Johnny Knoxville... only had time for 10 |
word i haven't had time either...ima post up by noon eastern if that's cool
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Nobody's fuckin with the U.S., ya chances of winning are growin dim
Ya betta take them fuckin towels off of ya heads...and throw em in Fuckin ragheads, bow down, I know you bitches are nervous as hell It aint hard to demolish you fags...when half you niggas are murkin yaself I piss in gold-plated toilets and wipe my ass with plenty c-notes You piss in a cave and wipe ya ass with scorpions after you eat goats So get the fuck out my face, I live luxiouriously in a second heaven Just keep ya mouth shut and drive my taxi to your brother's 7-11 We're on the hunt but Osama bin hiding, ducking the Pearly Gates And who's sain? It sure aint Saddam for fucking with the States |
sureloc-beginning seemed bad but it got better as i read on...good wordplay throughout the verse, flow could be improved..i liked the closer
trouble-nice verse throughout the entire thing...also had good wordplay (slightly better and more effective than surelocs)...also a good flow...you also had some hard hitting punches and personals id say trouble took this in every category, although wordplay was a close one v/troublesome |
Sureloc Holmes: didnt like the intro, but it definitely progressed as it went on, flow was really awkward, and some lines were really stretched... word play was real good, and the closer was funny too...good verse...
Troublesome: Flow was on point, punches were really good, and i really enjoyed almost every line, closer was pretty good too.... vote:Troublesome... i think sureloc had the easier task of insulting the US, but Troublesome did a real good job with his topic, and took this... |
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240544 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240546 Not even 4 other battles up to vote on |
Nobody's fuckin with the U.S., ya chances of winning are growin dim
Ya betta take them fuckin towels off of ya heads...and throw em in Fuckin ragheads, bow down, I know you bitches are nervous as hell It aint hard to demolish you fags...when half you niggas are murkin yaself I piss in gold-plated toilets and wipe my ass with plenty c-notes You piss in a cave and wipe ya ass with scorpions after you eat goats vs. an illiterate fuck, my stand is offish how can more than half the country hate em and he still be in office? Sureloc, ur verse wasn't bad, nothing below average in it, but that was the only quotable, tho it was a good one. Other lines were decent, just not witty enough. Trouble, ur last bars were ehh but ur first 3 were pretty nice, especially the first 2 so I got u winnin' this. Vote - -Troublesome- |
3-0
-Troublesome- WINS 3-0 Sureloc Holmes LOSES 3-2 |
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