Kin*Ethicâ„¢ (0-0) vs. sdizzle (0-0)
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a devil in the making, i wouldn't have guessed now that i see ya
the devils architecht?.. ... prolly the same dude who designed the leaning tower of pisa |
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lol ooops
i said "the devils architect" when i meant "hells architect".. blah same difference |
Punches Make sdizzle |Retire-Fast| Have this |Dickryder-Auto-Smacked| Cuz Sdizzle 'Leaves More MARKS On Balls' Then |Mcguire-Autographs!|
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for that ur vote dont count
A) u wont get the punch if u dont even know how to fucking pronounce the god damn name pisa (pee- zuh) SEE ya (see yuh) |
I gotta go with dizz on this one.
Golden Dayz, your vote can still count for Kin if you come back and explain why he won, however "pisa" is pronounced "pee-zuh," therefore making both of the lines rhyme. And, being that the only explanation for why you thought Kin won was because sdizzle's didnt rhyme, I have to DQ your vote for now. However, if you would like to come back and further explain your vote will count again. 0-0. |
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And Question .. I Thought Your Only Allowed To Have Two Lines? And Lol@Ur Rhyme Scheme SMH FLOW: PUNCH: META: MULTIS: COMPLEXITY: ENJOYMENT: YOUR VOTE: |
im going with Kin on this one... Sdizzle had a good punch and had a decent personal but i wasnt feeling it much... Kin ethic had a good multie and a pretty good metaphor in his punch and it just stood out more to me.. I would suggest putting your punch into 2 lines next time because some people might take points away from you because of your structure.
V/ Kin |
Thanks For Voting...
1-0 Kin*Ethic |
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thats 1 of the 2 most used punch formats *smh @ swaying* *asks for this post and the post i quoted to be deleted* *has no problem with the flow vote, im not goin to bitch if sum1 dont voe for me,cuz thats gay...* |
Well i Would Edit It Out But Theres No Edit Feature On This Site But Whatever ..
1-0 Me |
kin easily....sdizzle yours made didnt really get it...aint really rhyme eitha...no real meta eitha...or punch
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Thnx For Voting
2-0 Me |
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