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Acuity 09-06-04 04:36 PM

Elusiv G vs Yvonne
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-09-04 at 04:36 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 09-06-04 04:36 PM

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 04:36 PM.

System 09-07-04 06:18 AM

Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 06:18 AM.

Acuity 09-07-04 11:29 AM

best not u make u mad, u cud b on da rag
I shud step bak, n raise a white flag
Cos hooked on PMS, u cud use brute force 2 beat tha best
U shud confess, dat women jus can't handle stress
Dats why yo lyrics, r 4eva at the health clinics
I cud hook u up wit Dr. Nick, n pay 2nd rate 4 a 2nd rate verse
U always seem to b wack even though u rehearse
U seem restricted, in a movie u cud b depicted
As a student to this teacher, a scholar to this preacher
I'll hit u wid mad pace, smudge ur lipstick across ya face
I'll Run past, and do a smash n grab
Steal all $2 out ya handbag, leave u standin' in ya gladrags
Cos u broke, or postin wack rhymes for posts
Or just a bitch ass joke, u kudn; elevate high on a 100kilos of coke
Yvonne, wat a wack ass lyrical name, b ashamed
U betta suited called "fuckin lame" like a pop Mc strivin 4 fame
Least it wud b da truth, cos sayin u cn rhyme is uncouth
607posts n threads, i dnt giv a fuk, u gon b dead
At timez im scared to test a vet, but u must b heaven sent
ur eighteen, sayin u luv to eat MC's
well girl lick the cream off ma bak n the chocolate from ma crack
Time for contemplatin', over, no more deabtin'
Its fact, stated, I was destined to win this, since I was created


BLAP!!!!!!!!! BLAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Acuity 09-07-04 11:30 AM

dR. nICK--SIMPSONS DOCTOR WHO GIVS TREATMENT TO POOR PPL
pms---in lamens its an angry ass girl on her period

vote and vote in detail. Peace

Yvonne 09-07-04 02:01 PM

yo gee..you still wouldnt be smokeable cos the effect b 2 weak(1)
ur lines are indisputable,they barely irrelevant compared 2 ur sig
your punches are "flyweight",shit,you would never hurt a fly
cos u just wack in rap..dont believe?,herres a reason to cry
ya flows wud never go fast,cos it like the matrix,all in slo-mo
and its becos u got a barin fart..thats y u drop like a ho-mo
ur structure coming up like a pc disconnected,u cant win
cos ur spelling needs to be corrected AND thrown in the bin
admit it you suck..if not y u keep ya recs duck?
go to "big ben"& get ready,cos he gon clock at ur bad luck*




1-G=green=weed=it would never make nb go high...got it?


2- im refaring to this battle...and i said big ben cos he from the uk...



NB: most of the links complete the meaning of the line (eg : the links with his losses)


peace

Yvonne 09-07-04 02:01 PM

yo gee..you still wouldnt be smokeable cos the effect b 2 weak(1)
ur lines are indisputable,they barely irrelevant compared 2 ur sig
your punches are "flyweight",shit,you would never hurt a fly
cos u just wack in rap..dont believe?,herres a reason to cry
ya flows wud never go fast,cos it like the matrix,all in slo-mo
and its becos u got a barin fart..thats y u drop like a ho-mo
ur structure coming up like a pc disconnected,u cant win
cos ur spelling needs to be corrected AND thrown in the bin
admit it you suck..if not y u keep ya recs duck?
go to "big ben"& get ready,cos he gon clock at ur bad luck*




1-G=green=weed=it would never make nb go high...got it?


2- im refaring to this battle...and i said big ben cos he from the uk...



NB: most of the links complete the meaning of the line (eg : the links with his losses)


peace

Yvonne 09-07-04 02:03 PM

shit i made a mistake y'all to look at the post with the links................



sorry





peace

Pro. 09-07-04 02:10 PM

Voted For: Elusiv G

why I voted 4 elusive G...is because the punchez Yvonne threw where sorta off a lil...plus I like this line*Yvonne, wat a wack ass lyrical name, b ashamed
U betta suited called "fuckin lame" like a pop Mc strivin 4 fame*...it went smooth...

so
multis-E
punchez-tie
structure-E
overall battle-this was like watchin 2 hours of Girls gone wild....all hype an no action..lol...no hate

Yvonne-your junt was straight,but you should've hit a lil harder.

holla atcha folks!

Acuity 09-07-04 02:11 PM

uppin uppin y'all.......Vote n vote in detail.........Peace and Luv

Acuity 09-07-04 04:38 PM

uppin uppin y'all.......Vote n vote in detail.........Peace and Luv

Dirty Nigga 09-07-04 05:40 PM

Voted For: Yvonne

i vote for yvonne cos she had better punches which hit a lot harder than G'z and she put links which made her personals connect..and her structure was str8 decent....her flow was way better too...elusiv g sounded like he was talking to himself and he was just dropping wack ness...nothing of his verse rhymed...he got potentials but on my opinoin...yvonne gets this for a more decent job...

P E A C E

X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X 09-07-04 05:45 PM

Voted For: Yvonne

i vote 4 yvonne
1.bcoz its all good
2.easyer to read
3.elusiv g has load of lines take way to long to read (its lame)
good battle
v/yvonne

X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X 09-07-04 05:46 PM

n return tha faV PLZ ON MY BATTLE WITH PLAT

kahdaffi_black 09-07-04 07:39 PM

Voted For: Yvonne

she did good i hope this cat aint stupid enuff to face u again baby holla. another quality vote by (kahdaffi_black)


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