Freestyle (Up in tha clouds type shit)
 

I just write to recite precise rhythm
like jizm,
Spit knaledg out my mouth but y'all
take it as wizdm,
Fallin' angels from tha sky tryin' to
take us wit' em,
But I ain't goin' that route I'ma
blast and hit em,
Goin' against tha laws of gravity
causin' cataclysms,
I shadowbox wit' myself to see how
I'll dodge and get em,
85% plan to 86 wit' a 9,
10% see it but block it off in they mind,
When I 4:20 5-0 show up all tha time,
And if them niggas is bitches I'm in
tha beast all night,
Fuck it!!!

*85%- the deaf,dumb,and blind majority of tha planet.
*86- to kill a plan or action.
*9-nine millimeter handgun.
*10%- the enlighted yet still wicked.
*4:20-the time to smoke marijuana.

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Just a short freestyle let me know wha' y'all think.

lol you said you spit "knaledge"....isnt that contridicting...u need to work on ya vocab homez

Fo' sho' I'ma keep droppin'. Fo' everybody that show me luv, I appreciate it and much luv to y'all, those that hate... Fuck you.

How you figure that's contradictin'

well 2 b honest u tried sumthang different den tha otha time but it was missing dat special sumthang 2 set it off but keep writing ur gettin' there

i liked it homie, i havta be honest i havent read any of ur stuff b4 but i liked it, it was short n sweet, n original,I liked the use of statistics 2. obviously u have room 2 elevate but we all do. RTF peace.

not bad was feelin it should of been a little bit longer in my opinion but its all good get droppin them lines