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C.March 05-28-04 09:31 PM

-White Powder vs. Follow-Up-
 
-Rules-

10-20 lines
No Crew
No Hate VOTES
No Dickriding
No Feeding
No Recycling
30 Min Time Limit After Check In

-You Spit First-


Good Luck..


Followup = DGriff = DQ'ed

C.March 05-28-04 09:49 PM

Wondering if hes Ducking or he didnt read the rules???... anyways here my check in... I got 30 mins...

Follow-Up 05-28-04 09:51 PM

Yo Listen Kid

Ayo

Destroy ya authority, have ya crew followin orderly
Hold u cordially, WHite Powder wanna explore me
Im a lyrical assasin, me fearin this bastard?
Is like a pastor of a church, but with spirituals lackin
fuck u rap criminals the mac is subliminal
20 rounds blast, the minimal, treat ya life like graphs decreasin ya last intervals
my stacks up and im scarin this gentlemen
White powder i have u goin through more shells than aquarium centers
the pipe will get u devoured, during these night hours
You dont brush dirt off ya shoulda instead u brush off white powder
and when we talkin bout bitches u will get mentioned
u misused ya skills havin a name called ill intentions
u gone need a professor just to time these lectures
U just play with niggas marbles like Chinese checkers
U got bravery thats shockin me, try replacin me possibly
Im the ace and creator of this games philosophy
U a phony ho u want more dick i give u more clips
Cause in this rodeo u gone be landin in some bullshit

BItch

C.March 05-28-04 10:02 PM

.Check.

Yo you cant spit, your so weak you couldn’t even take a hit //
Your rhymes are probably pre-write, fuck that there probably bit //
You’re a noob to this site, this kid wouldn’t be accepted as a dark knight //
Imma murder this kid outright, but fuck it this time I ain’t gonna be polite //
Jus listen you should go back to b-more, Cause this battle ain’t even gonna have a close score //
Fuck battling.. this bitch ain’t hardcore, shit I ain’t battling this pussy anymore //
Cause this rook cant rap, the only way you could win is if you wore my brain as a thinking cap //
Yo his rhymes aren’t complex there just crap, I could spit 2 lines and still have this shit on wrap//
Fuck it if I have to follow up to his shit its gonna be easy, yo even his dickriders tryin to tease-me//
But his bitch is the only one who can please-me, Her mouth on my nuts.. its all breezy//
Yo I already won this contest, cause I just took over with lyrical conquest//
Lemme suggest, you give this shit a rest, cause you think your hot but no ones impressed//
Fuck it I roasted you, lemme bid your sorry ass adieu //
You couldn’t rap clean if you spit shampoo, fuck it your done…… pick another career to pursue //

..Compliments of Powder..

PoLiFicK 05-28-04 10:08 PM

white powder stole dis away and ran wit it he had a better flow knocked wit punches and personals follow-up in ok verse but no match here but u should elavate and u a be a tite nice test here..nice drop both emcees

white

bestline-You’re a noob to this site, this kid wouldn’t be accepted as a dark knight //
Imma murder this kid outright, but fuck it this time I ain’t gonna be polite //

nice

worsteline-none

follow

bestline-Destroy ya authority, have ya crew followin orderly
Hold u cordially, WHite Powder wanna explore me

nice

worsteline-none but sum stretched linez and flow was off

but nice drop

white powder-9/10
follow-up-8.6/10

winner-white p

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-28-04 10:27 PM

WHITE POWDER--- Yo u Came Way HARDER with Personls nice shit out there Nice Wordplay Good Line's Favorite 1::
You’re a noob to this site, this kid wouldn’t be accepted as a dark knight //
Imma murder this kid outright, but fuck it this time I ain’t gonna be polite //

Follow-Up--- yo i Seen ur BATTLE'S u a good n00b u came whack this time u had no hard hitting Punches at ALL or PUNCHES this was BADD for Follow-Up FAv Line from u

my stacks up and im scarin this gentlemen
White powder i have u goin through more shells than aquarium centers

^^ First line 2 short on that Bars


Break Down

White Powder

Flow 8/10 ( GOOD )
Rhymes 8/10 ( GOOD )
Structure 7/10 (Good / Decent )
Punches 8/10 ( GOOD )

Follow-Up

Flow 6/10 ( OK )
Rhymes 7/10 ( Good / Decent )
Structure 5/10 ( Bad / Allmost Decent not even )
Punches 4/10 ( WEAK! WEAK WEAK!!!! )


V/WHite POWDER

NoT JUSS OVER ALL BETTER VERSE

OVER ALL BETTER I CANT EVEN SAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!


ELAVATE FOLLOW UP

Killah Bwoy 05-28-04 10:38 PM

weak battle but i gave this to white powder his shit was better better structure better flow better personals better multis better metas better everything..lol but you need to up your vocab..your shit was aiight but not great...better than FU's shit...

vote:White

C.March 05-28-04 10:39 PM

Aight... Thanks Bro..... Uppin for votes.... Drop some links and ill hit em up if the opponent isnt in my crew...

DGriff 05-28-04 10:46 PM

Follow-up smashed white powder. Follow up verses made more sence then powders.

C.March 05-28-04 10:50 PM

Way to vote for yourself here Follow Up.... look at the IP's of DGriff and Follow-Up...

IP: 4289 77F4


EXACT SAME....


Nice try in cheating....

DGriff 05-28-04 10:56 PM

even though the IP is the same dont mean its the same person. I just think that he was better then u. It aint like its a crew vote. So technically the vote can still count.


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