Checkin in...
 

just checkin in....

rules are....
10 - 15 lines
no crew votes

it's too risky to try and diss me
i'm too crispy for this bitch whiskey
cause when i'm on da mic, gettin ready to strike
it's looking at bullets that are in mid flight
cause u know when i flow ur death has come
cause this bro better go like i've pulled a gun
and start to run, in every possible direction
u getting schooled fool and dis is a lesson
mess with More L and ur guaranteed to lose
so don't mess with me or be startin feuds
infact to keep ur pride intact
it might be better if you never rap
so bitchy whiskey you just got drunk
and i'll spit u out cause u tastes like punk

- More L

Told ya. I'll check in once one of my battles clears. You wanna hurry it up, go vote...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120280

Aiight. Checkin' in. Just woke up and found one of my battles cleared, so I'll get to spittin'.

Aiight.

The only "prime cuts" you got have fuckin' stitches,
as if you got ripped on by some mad as hell bitches,
when you came out and came clean about the syphilis
after dickin' them with all two of your angry inches.
You sit at home drawin' targets on your Kleenex.
You suck so much that you've lost the gag reflex.
And you know? I think I found your weakness.
Four words, yo. You just lack eliteness.
Lookie, this bitch couldn't put together a multi
if he had a fuckin' stapler and a whole roll of duct tape.
You step to the mic and think you're spittin' ill shit,
but like God to all the Christians, your punches are elusive.
I'm the new shit. I'll fuck you right up in your cranium.
You couldn't deliver a hard rap if yo knuckles was titanium.

:banghead: Peace.

I gotta give the win to Whiskey for better vcab, better wordplay and also it just flowed together more, More L man you should increase the size on your lines, and throw harder punches man you'll get better... vote - W

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120363

my vote goes to Whiskey by a long shot. no disrespect to more L.

whiskey-betta punches ,more details,just all around betta

More L- shit you were saying was not even relivent you need to follow ya long lines with more long lines ,you cant say a long sentance and the finish it witha short ending ya feel me
no disrespect
whiskey return the fav

uppin' for votes y'all. uppin... uppin... uppin...

yeah dis vote battle was shit...i gotta improve my flow

More that sucked Whiskey owned u son he had better punches flow everything

Whiskey=6/10
More=2/10

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