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Wrecker 08-13-04 11:26 PM

Wrecker vs The Kid P-Dizzle
 
Battle Rules:

5 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Accpet..i'll drop my verse tomorrow, i'm going to sleep..

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 11:26 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Both DQ'ed.. 5 bars = 10 lines

System 08-13-04 11:28 PM

Wrecker has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 11:28 PM.

System 08-13-04 11:37 PM

The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 11:37 PM.

Nynth Degree 08-14-04 01:52 PM

5 bars? That's unusual, but I'll give it a shot...

I'm bout to wreck ya, just like I did to your mother's placenta
And your pops? He's the reason you at the rape crisis centa (center)
Don't pretend ta (to), act tough, you'll get smack up 'cuz you're not that
You should stop that, you're all up on my nuts like a jockstrap
Dizzle killed this shit, but 5 bars is more awkward than your mom tellin' her parents you were illigitimate

There's my 5 bars...bring it.

Wrecker 08-14-04 05:19 PM

Yeh Not Knowin Things Kid, Coz Your Verse Is Pure ASSumption..
And Ye Swingin Blindly, Coz "The Kid" Ain't Seen, Like In Abortions..
So Check My Numbers, Coz Like A Math Teacher, I'mma Set Yeh Order,
N Don't Be Surprised, Coz I'll Break "P's" (peace) Like A Taliban Supporter..
Way Outta Yer Sight Kid, Coz The Only Punches Yeh Landin Is On Street Fighter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer..
Kid Am Always Above Yeh, So On My Entrance, This Herbs Bowin Down To Knees..
And You Cant Stop Wreck, Coz I'll Make P (pee) Burn Slowly, Like People Wit STD's..

Wrecker 08-14-04 05:20 PM

thats not 5 bars idiot, thats 5 lines..5 bars is what i did, so yea, uppin' for votes..

Wrecker 08-14-04 05:22 PM

Way Outta Yer Sight Kid, Coz The Only Punches Yeh Landin Is On Street Fighter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer..

explanation- dizzle is like that west coast slang (shizzle, dizzle, fa rizzle..etc..) so nove writer's as in i'm erasin dizzle..you should get the other bars, p'z

<UzI> 08-14-04 05:48 PM

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Vote:Kid
Betta rhymin,and structure,and flow
Wrecker ok verse but ur structure was hard 2 read No hate
<UzI> Vs MC Rabbit (Needin dis closed)
<UzI> Vs Turban

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Wrecker 08-14-04 06:10 PM

kid, who the hell votes on structure..umm..yea, also rhyming??..also Flow, lol..

the Main Categories are..
punches, personals, werdplay, vocab, metas, opener, finisher...retard..thats a d/r vote..or an herb vote..

!Mc Merc! 08-14-04 06:41 PM

Voted For: Wrecker

bOOOM wrecker u wrecked this punk mufauka, he was weak, and you meked him. You had good wordplay structure, flow and punches. P-dizzle u need t elavate and become better caus eu suck,......... really

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Wrecker 08-14-04 07:34 PM

uppin' for more votes..ok i'm freetyping coz it says i gotta have 50 characters..

Nynth Degree 08-14-04 08:42 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Wrecker
...5 bars is what i did...

You did 8 bars, dumbass...uppin'

headgames 08-14-04 09:01 PM

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Damn, really close battle here, but i think the Kid took it, he had a better opener and closer, and you both had good multis, but i think the Kid took the punches, wrecker had better wordplay and structure, but Kid had the flow, and the creativity, wrecker had better personels, but The kid had better metaphors, all in all, the kid just had a better verse, so he gets my vote

TURBAN 08-14-04 09:14 PM

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

lol again i am sitting here laughin haha dizzle did it again i loved everyline , classic shit , that last line really took it home , it was the nail in the coffin for my vote "Dizzle killed this shit, but 5 bars is more awkward than your mom tellin' her parents you were illigitimate" that seriously made me laugh nice structure and it was nice ,

turban

vote dizzle

Wrecker 08-14-04 10:34 PM

ok..man, i quit this site ya'll are some friggin penis rydin kids, its obvious i won, maybe he's immin ya'll for votes or whatever..but i know i didnt loose..you could bring this to any sight and i woulda won..


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