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My flames would be the same when I rip you up with my huge arms/
Ill be the one not you to break the alarms cuz I got all the charms/.
Now listen I could win the ladies over you and you remind me of a jew/
You say yer new no excuse your one of the few goin down cuz you got no clue/.
That im young and one of the few who will be kickin you in/
My boi went to find you were you been?/.
Don’t say shit because you aint got muscle to backup your mouth/
Cuz you aint from the south nether am I but who you ask/.
Ill be the one to sneak up from behind with a mask/
Im gonna tap on yer shoulder you turn around I hit you, its only a task/.

You came finally where you been I asked myself/
Why don’t you just drop dead cuz you remind me of a elf/.
That makes me eager to wanna take you outside/
You eat to much that’s the reason why your wide/.
Come here try and sctatch my ride/
If you did that I would be forced to punch you in, so you better hide/.
Cuz I could cut you down with my hit so stop thinking yer the shit/
You don’t even fit into your own briefs so you better quit/.
Before some or maybe even me is forced to walk all over you/
Cuz you don’t even belong in this crew, people who agree only a few/.

gd stuff brutha para 8/10

yo thanks man realy that honest?

U P P I N

yo dat was tite man i liked it shit was raw!

some tight shit man, i liked it.

shit ur shit is nice that is tight 8/10 keep it up G you need to work a bit on the structure, but the rest was ill

fuck structure i liked the entire rap

holy shit then u'll like my other song i made 32 lines im saving it for a topicial tho in the future

ya U P P I N

uppin come on people

well im uppin hello?