MaRVOLOUSJ1009 VS Fourmost..*VOTE*
 

aight umm 10-12 lines...nothin more....ya verse is due 30 minutes after u check in nun of dat u spit first shit....so come check in dunny

Ight Checkin In But I Ain't Spittin First Either So You Better Follow The Deadline

dogg u not understandin after u check in u got 30 minutes da drop and da same with me so since u checked in u gota spit or u get dq'ed

Yeah Im Gonna Post But You Made The Call So You Droppin In 30 Min Too!

Ight I Dropped First Cuz This Cat Scared To Drop First And Get Merked But It Aint Gonna Matter, You Better Drop Within The Next 10 Mins, Cuz Ya Had Over 30 Mins Alredy

stretched my bars a bit so i never spit the full amount

Sparkin Beef Wit Provokin Verbs/ Ya Barkin Without Teeth 'n' Can't Understand Those Spoken Words/1
Left Beggin On Tha Street Chokin On Bum's Nerds//Gaggin On Mans Meat Like You Smokin Tha Herbs//2

/Gleam Of Fame Crushed Like Broken Bone Marrow/ Ya Rhymin Scheme Is Flushed wit Bars That Aint No Aero/3
//Dis Ciggarette Tips His Anal Shaped Sombero// Smoke Dis Fag 'n' Destory Like The Cape Passero//(wordplay)4

/Like Will Farrell I got Peeps Laughin At Ya Abnormalities/ No Hitler But Terrorizin Like ya Jew Waitin For Ya Fatality/5
//Ya Diss Full Wit General Technicalities 'n' Dats Playin Wit Fiya//Bring Back To Reality As I Make Ya Clique Retire//6

I Will Lyrically Injure Marv 'n' Make Ya Look Like A Starved Draqueen Named Ginger/7
Showcase You On Jerry Spinger Unda Tha Title My Asshole Is Where He Stuck His Finger/8


Explanations:
line 4- in britian cigarrettes are called fags/Cape Passero A Spanish Ship The Was Destoried In Battle
line 5- no discrimination towards jewish people

u'z a little bitch da type da call da fedz,when i reach and draw da lead-
y do u rap dogg ya fukkin "flow gets sleeped on" like "water-beds"-

im da sickest on rb trust dis brother...marvolousjay son spit gutta-
ya career gon be like "stevie gettin punched once" u gon be a "1 hit wonder"-
(think about dat)

rap battles out of me and dis fagget u know which writer's is hotter-u'z a lame dogg only "hit-single" u eva gon have is "fightin a dollar"-

its nothin talk badd dunn u'll be recievin dem shot & die be4 u flee 2 da cops- when i post somthin whut u readin is hott,jay if u dont believe dat he's hott-dogg i'll put da "pump in ya mouth" like i was waitin 4 ya "wezzin da stop"-you come da queens? dogg datz like "lil kim spendin a weekend with pac"-

Ight Bring On Tha Votes, And Explains Like This
Multis-
Flow-
Punches-
Personals-
Creativity-
wordplay-
overall-

uppin....can ya niggaz pleez vote and stop sleepin...

Multis- marv
Flow- both
Punches- both
Personals- four
Creativity- marv
wordplay- four
overall- TiE...but i would go wit..fourmost..

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^Thanx Fo The Feed^......got any battles PM them to me and I'll Vote On Them

Both brought a decent amount of variety to hold there own, but marvolous took it jus the way he wanted to leave with a win, so he is with my vote a lot more fluent n what he was gettin across, keep it real peace..

Vote: MARVOLoUsJ1009

wow how was this even a battle


marv killed him the first 6 lines shut shit down my nikka killed it whit that shit

u'z a little bitch da type da call da fedz,when i reach and draw da lead-
y do u rap dogg ya fukkin "flow gets sleeped on" like "water-beds"-

im da sickest on rb trust dis brother...marvolousjay son spit gutta-
ya career gon be like "stevie gettin punched once" u gon be a "1 hit wonder"-
(think about dat)

rap battles out of me and dis fagget u know which writer's is hotter-u'z a lame dogg only "hit-single" u eva gon have is "fightin a dollar

lmaooo real sick an seriuos

lmaoooo thank u dunn sik just madd cuzz we aint lettin him in da crew but its nothin

aight here we go

Multis-both..but better wuns from marv
Flow-four
Punches-marv
Personals-four
Creativity-marv
wordplay-both
overall-marvolous took this ..but good battle

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Multis- even
Flow-even
Punches-mar
Personals-mar
Creativity-four
wordplay-four
overall-four

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