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B To The D 02-12-06 06:44 AM

What Was I(UNF And Implicit)
 
www.soundclick.com/unf

Yeah!

Left Feed

Track N Snypa N Mizz Doggystyle
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2653643
Them Shortys,Them N***as

Fux Trak N Snypa
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2653644
Them Shortys

Tha Q. 02-12-06 09:26 AM

There was too much dead air between the hook and the first verse...should have ad libbed it


1st cat...vocals are clear but needs more presence, IMO....dub them or amp them


flow is good


there needs to be talking or adlibbing between the verses...it sounds hella empty


2nd verse...sounds expressive...good flow...could stand for more vocal presence though


UNF...flow is good


str8 verse


good collab...just needed some filler in between the verses



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B To The D 02-12-06 09:35 AM

Thanks........................

Enygma 02-12-06 12:30 PM

Yeah.....I gotta agree with Tha Q about that dead air space in the beginning. The first verse should have started right where the beat kicked in at. First dude was alright.....his verse seemed short though cause he started late. Second dude sounds like the same dude. His quality isn't the best....sounds like he's too far away or something. Content is pretty good though....I like it. UNF, your quality came up a little. This was actually a pretty good track from you guys....

Keep it up :thumbup:™

B To The D 02-12-06 12:52 PM

thanks...................:)


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