TONYSELF PRESENTS*****Your a never was...........exclusive track .........
 

Your a never was There it is folk ......... :thumbup:


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233613
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233611

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ok i liked the flow and the beat kinda caus eit was different the delivery on the hook i like the third verse the ebst rhyme scheme was killing it
need to upp the volume on the hook its hard to hear
"yous a never was you cant be a has been"

Beat's different man....I wasn't really feeling it at first, but it grew on me. Flow was nice on this. I don't know what it is about your vocals, but it seems like they're on like a whole separate layer or something than your beat. I don't know, maybe it's just the beat fuckin with me....lol. Anyway, this is some nice shit man.....good job :thumbup:

*triple dipped*

You already know this shits a knocker in the whip:) that hook is krazy ... the whole production over this was sick. Some serious ventage.. lol... deff one of my favorite joints on the boards right now

you say homie like ice cube....word....i liked this the hook is good hence why you need to turn the volume up on it like woah so it can hit harrrrrrrd...more n more your soundin like a white ice cube man...word

good thing i saved the mixdown ill have to adjust the hook volume but myspace did fuxx with the quality of the track no doubt

beat nice. Like your flow and delivery. sound like a mix of Ice Cube and Jay-Z to me. lool but that's coo. got good lyrics going in this.

Back to reality shit is hook i'm guessin? WAYY to loww. lol but it sounded tight

second verse nice too. likin' this man. tight jam so far. flow stay going. like the pitch changes. lol so much like Ice Cube and JAy-Z mix.

hook is tight

third verse like the energy in beginning. Flow is good delivery emotion nice. lyrics good too.

good shit. nice track man. 9/10

EZ

*the prophet*

^^^^^^^^^^werd up spizzul

beats wierd but kinda cool....u come in nice man.....i cant hear cuz wood wont stfu but from wut i do hear it sounds cool......hooks hot.....multis their was nice, flows my fav part about this one i think.....good track..idk why it kinda has a tupac feel tho...lol....

*faggot induced freestyle*

^^^haha good shit we got some ...... comin up

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ahh i hate listening through myspace....it compresses the songs...and fucks the quality....i cant stand it...

but other than that...its not bad...im not sure if i like the beat or not really...i think it would be dope at a show and what not..

flow is pretty nice....im not sure what it is...maybe your vocals arent mixed down to the beat well....but it just doesnt seem like theyre meshing well together at the start..

hook is pretty coo.......overall theres not a lot i can say bad about it...its not a track i would download and bump in the whip or anything..but it was worth the listen.....keep it up

Listen'n beats pretty dope actually

1st: bouncy flow like that...lyrics an concept dope on this verse like the way u approached it...nice presence nice aggression for the joint..

HoOk was a lil low couldnt really hear it had to play back woulda sounded hot if u turned it up a lil bit..

2nd: Harder than the first real lyrical on this joint like it dog...lyrics an concept flowed more natural wit it...presence seemed comfy...u was just killin it the whole time...

HoOk same

3rd: lol idk its a toss to the 2nd man this 2 verses is hot man...u approached this wit arsenal kid...but basically though all 3 verses just made sense ahahhaha...like lil the outro too man wit the echo double on tony self...dope track my dude.. my ratin 8/10 holla :thumbup: