A Song Without Da Crew Feat. Shanice
 

HOOK:
Just me and Shanice
We da type dat shoot at police
a song without da crew
so baby girl what's new (2x)

Shanice's Verse:

Shanice; real name no gimmicks
Change it up a little bit, real bitch no limits/
I know it's rare, but nigga they feel me everywhere/
I'm from the land of white tees, Dickie's and Roca-Wear/
got bitches that talk shit watchin they back, lookin ova they shoulder/
ask any nigga i'm the best part of wakin up like a cup of folgers/
I'm the oldest and the youngest at the same time/
Assistant to hood, like we both got the same mind/
I'm disgusting, known for ball bustin'/
Crushin', bluffin', dustin', it's nothin'..../

HOOK:
Just me and Shanice
We da type dat shoot at police
this a song without da crew
so baby girl what's new(2x)

Hood_Dawg's Verse:

nigga if u feelin' froggish jump
we as scary as dat nigga Donald Trump
so if u out wit no gat u better scat
cuz we always know where da fuck u at
i'm always careful when i spit verses
becuz they always end up comin' wit' curses
and it's not like they just happen
nigga i make 'em happen while i'm rappin'
so for all u bitches typin shit this is what we crappin'
becuz in da end we always leave da crowd clappin'
so u better follow what shanice and i said
cuz we always leave bitch niggas like you dead

HOOK:
Just me and Shanice
we da type dat shoot at police
this a song without da crew
so baby girl what's new(2x)


24 hours to drop a link or this will be CLOSED.......
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

upppinnn niggaz leave feedbacc

damn yaw crew stick aroudn like diplomats for real..
yaw a tight crew..I like how yaw gettin active..stay together for real..

Shanice yo verse was nice..flowed good like an audio..
sounded a bit like foxy's..but I hate foxy..but I like your flow
but that ball bustin like was so offensive to men ;)
we're not just balls and dicks okay

yo hood..change ur name you gonna make people think ur wack
when your actually not lol..cept one line made me frown
the crappin and clappin rhyme scheme..to basic..toss a multi in
but you did real hot in the other om I peeped..GJ to yaw on this one
don't do chorus's lol nice verses but chorus's are wack :)

I would go on but I'm not dickridas for yaw niggas p-p-ppeace

pep somethin of mien if ya want

yo nice drop yall...............love tha hell out da wordplay.....................an dat was a wet ass hook...........................L-N-L Fam. ta tha fullest..hold it down

naw not at our fullest we still got more to spill as long as i'm round we gon' get this bitch crackalatin even more

hmmmmmm wonder why dephy gave this so much feed??


for real though i thought this is ok.
shanice your verse has good flow, wasnt feeling your first line though, bit of obie's influence?? good rhyme's could be a bit more tech with some help.


hood dawg, yopu should be thankfull that she was in this with you, I seen another drop from you which was better,thi sisnt your best.

were's your link's?

shit nice drop on bith sides shanice u fuckin witty nice rhymes hood dwag ya verse was sick as well nice multis and vocb u both had smoe preety good punches and who ever wrote the hook good job............

man what da fuck u mean i should be thankful man sure sure maybe i did better but i know i wasn't wack man u dont know shit

huh?

I dont know shit,blah. dont pm me asking for help then. If you do need help I will be happy to give it to you. lik eI done about 2 minute's before you posted your bullshit.

were's your link's?

that is all.

hood relax son he juss givin feed back learn to take constructive criticism man you aint gettin nowhere by spazzin out

hey my bad didn't mean to i emailed u bout that

man that post i typed was retarded dont even pay attention to dat

this is his link i.e, he didnt know how to post it so I posted his for him.


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170971


he know's how to do it now so he has no reason not to post link's in the future.

damn thats pretty good yall reppin shit good...yo shanice ive seen you elevated from your first drop there good looks;) yall had your thins n stuff yall had real dope flow n shit but i seen how both yall work welll have a similair style good looks chekc it out:

shanice:
i see very good elevation from you creativity in your lines now very good....your vocab was upped a little i likes your opener lol even tho you kinda robbed obie trice..haha but tis ight you fisnh the next line with soem good vocab so its all good word...very well doen with the stucture i thought and you flowed so well very good...i saw some lines with creativty and wordplay so its all good, good verse...

hood dawg...
damn you really threw it down also good job mayn...vocab was well in use and then you had this little thing with the flow im not sure what it was but it was good lol...your stucture was also used good and you flowed well as i said before..i also seen good elevation in you to great job...i see how yall cats go good together for collabs keep doing this shit and you might actually learn stuff as yall work together....

fav lines:
shanice:
Shanice; real name no gimmicks
Change it up a little bit, real bitch no limits/
^very good lines the last line has good emotion n it was jsut straight tight and some good vocabulary....good looks;)...

hood dawg:
and it's not like they just happen
nigga i make 'em happen while i'm rappin'
so for all u bitches typin shit this is what we crappin'
becuz in da end we always leave da crowd clappin'
^^i more liked the last 2 lines there better but great job here also good wordplay very creative...good multis...good job...pz

together rating..8.1/10

-Parallel

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