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everytime i call you got somethin to do
so i'm juz' gonna stop callin you
i got to the point where i don't care bout sh*t
you go out of your way, i'm tried of it
it'z your f*ckin turn to step up to the plate
juz' remeber there is no wait
it'z now or f*ckin never
don't pull that sh*t on me there is no whatever
it'z really easy do you care or not
would you even care if i f*ckin got shot
come on i want some answers and i want them now
not so easy is it wow
to bad i already knew
and now you know too
so when i get all mad at you
you already know wat i'm going through
all i'm tryin to do is make this sh*t last
go ahead tell me how much you hate me,but you be able to run f*ckin fast
you try to talk to someone that acts like they don't want to talk to you
then you tell me if our friendship is true

Whats this? iz it a love letter or your rappin?
you hopin' a bitch'll read it den sumfin will happen?
its good though, ina kind of love sick way
send it to a girl on a card, u mite win a heart, but boys think you gay
man, this shit is harsh, sounds like u got chucked
do u really love the girl or is she jus' someone u fucked
you's a boy you shouldnt be talkin this
cuz to other boys you be speakin bullshit
man it sounds like you got a real issue here
get yaself some x or get fucked on some beer
its clear u upset but we dont wanna know
all we wanna see iz ur lyrical flow
heres ya review you could be summet great
jus' dont let this girl wreck you man shes more than you can take
rap about anything just not love
all an all ur rap .. it aint dat good

4 Your Info I'm A Gurl And See If Anyone Cares Bout Your Problems Anymore!

And By The Way It's Called ''open Mic'' And It Waz On My Mind So Plz Stop Haten When You Don't Kno Wat Your F*ckin Talkin Bout Dumba**

This Is A Message From Me To You To Let The Web KNOW You Can't Give Advice! Plus Hon I Hate To Tell You But You Only Have 10 Post, Like I'm Gonna Listen To You

this aint supposed to be a battle forum but i guess it works lol....herbs..basically it sux both need to elevate....peace.

We Weren't Battlin

lol whats goin on ere .. by tha way i share an account so it wernt me who rote that shit ok .. n wat dus elevate mean ?

Why you battling in oppen mic ?

we weren't battlin god d*mn and elevate means bascly to grow up, and you need some more help, or you need to rap more to get better

pretty nice drop work on ur structure and vocab

Thanx It'z Bout Time I Got Real Feedback
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