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DQ 04-22-06 05:06 AM

Enygma vs. Jay 286
 



Rules: follow them!


Topics: make your choice...


Tracks are due Wednesday April 26

Votes are due Friday April 28

(there is no rule about voting so far but if I see no one votes, I may have to install this)


No max time limit, min time limit is 1:00


Good luck and drop the hotness!



Jay Rose 04-24-06 09:48 AM

checkin' in....
doin superhero...wid a twist...ha i think....ill drop by wed

Jay Rose 04-24-06 12:31 PM

its gon be a short one cuz im lazy....n i gotta do album stuff

Jay Rose 04-24-06 05:10 PM

k the song is up.....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3839638

SUPER DICK AWAY!!!

Enygma 04-24-06 07:12 PM

Word.....will try to drop by the deadline :(

Good shit by the way man :thumbup:™

Jay Rose 04-24-06 11:29 PM

yea you best not try hard on the quality cuz i didnt....haha....get at me bout the track we got goin tho....

Enygma 04-26-06 12:02 AM

:D

Alright

Topic: I'll Be Alright

Willa 04-26-06 11:40 PM

beat choice fits track cool
pretty creative track hook part of it is off beat a little bit
flow was on for the most part off in a few places
pretty cool track
e not sure how thsi beat fits ur topi lol but well see
lol i like it already
vocals are too loud in some places emotion is good flow is good
lyrics cool told a few different scenarios
enygma i was felling ur track more if you didnt have the whole all right all right everything is gonna be alright thing it wouldnt be nearly as dope lol i love it

vote enygma
but both were good
oyd reppin

DQ 04-28-06 04:59 PM

Jay 286


Told you this in the PM I sent: I LOVED this track. I mean, yes a lot of things could've been improved but the entire Super Dick theme was just hilarious to me. It does show that it was just a quick drop but you got all aspects down pretty good for a quickie. Your flow was on point most of the time, lyrics could have been far better though (more creativity in the lines itself, the concept was nice though). I never heard your tracks before...feeling the voice and the attitude. I was pleasantly surprised



Enygma


Okay, first off: the beat annoys me till death but I will try to forget about that for a while. The idea of a hook is good but I feel this one did not contribute enough to the track, it would've been just fine without it. You made it too repetitive and you sounded bored as well. The verses on the other hand were on a whole different level. You had the right energy going on, the flow was on point and the attitude was there. I am not that familiar with your work but I did always enjoy listening to your tracks because of your voice tone and your overall presence. Prolly best track of this week...props



Vote: Enygma but props to both of you for dropping some good shit.

Jay Rose 04-28-06 05:55 PM

yay...i got to battle the best track of the week....friggin sweet

Jay Rose 04-28-06 05:57 PM

can i vote for me so i dont get ko'd if not....none you other fuckers better vote ....just leave it at 0-2 thank you!

Jay Rose 04-28-06 05:59 PM

and dq lyrics?? comon "batwing" didnt anybody see the movie waiting....ugh

Enygma 04-28-06 11:13 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Jay 286
and dq lyrics?? comon "batwing" didnt anybody see the movie waiting....ugh

The Goat!!!! :thumbup:™

Jay Rose 04-28-06 11:38 PM

haha....yea i didnt fit that one in, but i still got 2 points

DQ 04-29-06 05:52 AM

Enygma: 2 votes - Jay 286: 0 votes


Enygma wins and receives 3 points (not 4 for a KO because I set KO on 3-0)

Jay loses and receives minus 2 points


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