MaRVJay1009 vs (Stanza)
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
3 votes=ko
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 06-11-05 at 12:48 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.


Closed - Expired / old battle win

dogg r u gonna check in????

(Stanza) has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 01:29 PM.

Yeah Mayne Please dont rush me You know I Got Those other 4 battles to get out the way to LOL Ima drop today Are you ?

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 01:55 PM.

real talk i'll kill ur ass,wear a vest its nothin im still gon blast.
& put dis kid "stanza in da air" like dem "old car bill board ads".*
im spittin off a top...u sittin at ya cpu with paper & a long pen.
u suck! battlin in a "hurricane" u still wouldn't get a "strong-WiN(d)".
u been rappin on rv 4 a couple years now & you forcin line still?.
only "stanza we'll see on tv" is dat cat "george from seinfield".
alias is KiNG DiPSET came back cuzz he miss text,rv watch dis hater.
cant do shit just a bum with no "goals" in life like "bad soccer player's".
u aint c'in marvjay datz whut ya squad say bring it 2 were ya mom stay.
i will & make dis fag stanza "leave north carolina" faster "sean may".


*stanza is a old ass car from back in da day...

okay now uppin 4 some votes.....

I Think That I Got You mayne ...>but Lets see ....Ive seen you drop Some way betta Shit than That man

Wassup?

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

I Roll Solo With my Barz Of Steel Thatll Smack You all the Way To CALI-Fornia
Lexicon Already Served Yo ass The Black Plaque so Why I Gotta Own Ya?
5...ok decent punch, although bolding the names is pointless cuz it has no relevance to the punch itself.
You Spose to be A hard Core Man.......But You Lost to Black Queen
I Guess Since Hotshh ended Your Reign Winnings been A Hard Thing
5...again, you talkin about him losin, that aint a real punch and sticking on that subject alone gets tired fast.
You not from The Hood Dawg And Thats Why The Dex really Ripped Yo Ass
You Say You Tough as Hell Well I got Heaven rymes Thatll Break Yo Glass
5...stanza, ya disappointing, staying on the same subject is getting played like fuck.
46 wins and 9 Loses id Say You Was dope But Your D/R Are Crackheads
Working The Stock At Food Lion Was The Only Time You Stacked Bread
6...finally, a punch, ok wordplay but cud be better.
Its Been Nice Knowing You Many niggas dont Live To See my Last bar
My lyric So Hot I Took care of Yo Funneral & Put Yo Ashes in a Glass jar
5...borderline self-glorifying in here, not good also the whole feel was kinda basic.

OVERALL: 26/50


real talk i'll kill ur ass,wear a vest its nothin im still gon blast.
& put dis kid "stanza in da air" like dem "old car bill board ads".*
7...LoL!!! i know tha car you on about, them fuckin rustbuckets now....nice personal and punch.
im spittin off a top...u sittin at ya cpu with paper & a long pen.
u suck! battlin in a "hurricane" u still wouldn't get a "strong-WiN(d)".
5...not that good, the forced wordplay didnt help much and that win(d) was pretty weak.
u been rappin on rv 4 a couple years now & you forcin line still?.
only "stanza we'll see on tv" is dat cat "george from seinfield".
6...decent personal and punch on his name here, although stop forcin ya wordplay.
alias is KiNG DiPSET came back cuzz he miss text,rv watch dis hater.
cant do shit just a bum with no "goals" in life like "bad soccer player's".
6...ok wordplay, i was feelin the whole soccer no goals concept.
u aint c'in marvjay datz whut ya squad say bring it 2 were ya mom stay.
i will & make dis fag stanza "leave north carolina" faster "sean may".
4...weak as hell, some homo shit in there that aint workin for ya and the wording was choppy.

OVERALL: 28/50


wow.....
personally i think marv won....
stanza i think your opinion of marv's verse being wack was wrong....he had some played concepts, but also some dope punches with good wordplay and nice plays on ya name

i think what let you down stanza was playin on the people he lost to for like 3 bars, no one likes to see punches on the same shit over and over again, it gets played fast....also the fact that you bolded the names of ppl he lost had no point to it unless you added some separate punch to go with them....ya punches were pretty much average.....

no hate....
but....

V/ - Marv

RTF!!!! on any battle......links in my sig!!! werd!! :thumbup:

u think u got dis?? lmaoooo.....i typed my verse in liek 10 minutes and ur losin

lmaooooooooooooo dis nigga rset his record again yo ur da worst fam...take dat dumb shit out ya sig

LOL STFU Bcuz I Aint Got My Record Reset I Got it Transfered to my other Account so STFU Dumbass

You Always Somewhere bitching about somethin.......

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