~RaPiDfIrE~ vs. makaveli-rest
 

10 lines
no bs votes...
u spit first and I'll drop soon after...

peace

checkin in

you say your rapid
you cant even cap it
you aint shit
sayin you could spit
im hitten you bit by bit
each word makin you wanna end this skit
you just a faggot
to this game u just a magot
dont try to sag it
im gonna bring my gun kit
make you stop talkin shit



sorry for the lateness
my computer froze so it all got deleted

go................................................ .................................................. ..

oh dear...I didn't realize it'd be this hard...



I'll stab u in the eye until u leak puss..
u shoulda left ya comp froze..it didn't delete much..
I'ma beat ya ass like bobby brown seen the past...
ur like a black woman in texas...the queen of drags..
how many fuckin faggots do I attract already?
5 battles and this is the second machaveli!
I'ma shred skin tissue n piss on ya heart...
leave u like Napoleon, tear ur bone-apart..
blah blah blah...filler filler filler..n what's worse
is ^^ that's enough to beat ur verse

ok....vote...thank u

peace

:laugh:

He's actually right..mak, you REALLY REALLY need to elevate BAD...so, wanna battle? :laugh:

Naw, but for real..rapid fire got this shit EASILY..had personals, flow, and way harder punches..mak, you need to change your approach badly, your structure and personals are in major need...dialing 911 aint even gunna help..seriously.

Rapidfire, I know this aint ya best, and didnt have to be...overall, nice job to ya though..

Mak, no hate, just elevate (eh, that rhymed)

VOTE ~ Rapidfire..

Please hit this up. I took the time for yours..

Thanks.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114599

Lollll
 

This one don't even need explainin' but because I have too, Mak I think that you should seriously take up a new profession, bcoz I got a ten yr old nephew that'd eat you alive!!!!........
All i got to say is this
"I'ma shred ya skin tissue and tear ya apart,
Leave ya like Napolean, tear ya Bone-a-part
Blah blah blah...filler filler filler, n what's worse
is^^that first line was good enough to shit on your whole verse!!!!

sorry bout the editing Rap, you know you spat fire on this' herb' ass!!!

Rapid..
didnt need to do shit really.. im surprised u actually battled him.. nice lines word to what ill said that bar was the truest state ment on rb.. ok im lieing lol well seriously didnt need to do much to win you pretty much took all the categories except whackness but i hope u appreciate that

Mak..
elevate.. really.. go read a dictionary.. and watch bet on fridays.. go to whackness emegency whatever.. okay and uhh go ask some ppl for help.. last thing.. pray to someday be a herb

Rapid got this fairly easily
He actually had punches
He had wordplay..and flow
Mack..elevate..you need
to work on ya punches
And wordplay alot..go WEC
They can help you with that

v/ Rapid Fire

please return tha favor and drop an honest vote here...thank you

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114559

whats wec





i would vote on yours but i dont have over 100 posts

Wackness Emergency Center....go to the main forums and u will see it

Not enough posts to poll but, here's what I thought.....

This was a tough one to decide...neck n' neck to the last line...LOL...seriously
though....makaveli-rest didn't stand a chance...RaPiD' took this easily...on all levels...better punches, personals, vocab, and creativity...makaveli-rest...hit the WEC ASAP...yer' shit was wack...weak in pretty much every aspect....some serious elevation is needed before you should even consider battling again.... My Vote > RaPiDfIrE (didn't try hard but didn't need to...
better in every category: punches, personals, vocab, and creativity)

iight...I'll hit ur shit up...it'd be nice if u could poll vote after u get 100 posts tho..

peace

I explained my vote at an earlier time
;)


v/ Rapid