ransum vs don cardyac
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No feeding(using what the 1st person said against them.)

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-10-07 at 01:53 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Ransum has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-07 01:56 PM.

don cardyac has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-07 01:57 PM.

when it comes to wacks like you, outta the game is where i've ran some(ransum), you lame/
you the type to run on 2020 and have gay predators hold you for your own name/
its game time, why slang rhymes, like i'm a let'chu lames shine/
i'll let'cha stomach hold more shells than big G's hangtime(thewire)/
so REWIND to the cypher sTOP you PLAYin' like you SCORIN" somethin'/
but i'm the type to put the red dot to your fore head like a RECORD button/
multi's or punches i'm better than you, what'chu wanna do?/
you couldn't take my soul(sole) if i stomped you out wit' its shoe/
i can only do nameplay cuz i'm new here and i don't know yur lifestyle/
all i know is that you can't rap and i'm your wife's style/
and you think you ran some(ransum) youngins' on the site,but i ain't worried/
cuz i don't play for the knick but i will get this STAR BURIED(starbury)/
i got a crack, you a fiend thats why you want my supply, nope!/
but i can get this youngin' off ki's(key) like barry white attemptin' high notes/
i got a BULLY flow, you got it twisted like an INDIANBURN(bullyharrassment)/
acceptin' this was your suicide, its DUMB to DIE well, you LIVE and you LEARN.

dont think u stand a chance cuz you saw my spit on the cypher cuz u'r dead
i wont use guns to aim at him, i'll stab him with pencil to fill him up with led/
tell me whats your secret to ur veres?...i’ll just investagate more
I got to the bottom of wackness & found Don asleep on the floor/
y r u full of shit? u dont even comprehend da battle speeches
even ya hits 'arrive to die on land' like whales on beaches/
kid its wrong, dont do it, shit.. why you set up ya death
should of put ya brains infront of ya feet befor you took that step/
this dumb fuck dont know what to do an i can clearly see him choking
cuz you the type to go to a handyman when u get u'r spirt broken/
there no help for you, so pray while i type... that ransum collaps
cuz your verse like a thong...it wont cover your ass/
u'r dead kid, cuz my shots are bullets not pel-lets
an don..I'll spring an attack that will leave fall and winter jealous/
another fag thinkin since hes cypher was decent.. battles he handles
so ya ass know, ya creations? all fruit sent like fragrant candles/ MOTHER FUCKAH....

YOU AINT FUCKING WITH ME....
PIEROD...

Voted For: Ransum

Ah whats good Ran..
Don..your verse was stechted..ya attempted some name play but it was kind of weak..ur punches were pretty whack to be honest..Ran, ya gettin better,..your verse was better..had a few whack punches no offense..but you did a decent one or two that made me laugh haha..vs nothin

y r u full of shit? u dont even comprehend da battle speeches
even ya hits 'arrive to die on land' like whales on beaches

u'r dead kid, cuz my shots are bullets not pel-lets
an don..I'll spring an attack that will leave fall and winter jealous
vs.

nothin..

v/ Ran

Voted For: Ransum

vote: Ransum

don had some nice punches he just couldnt word them together enough so his lines ran long...and that really hurt him
ransum you came hard enough to win but ive seen better from you kidd...

overall this battle was ight both yall had nice wordplay ransum just flowed alot better so he gets da vote..

upp'in for votes....
TO END THIS BATTLE ALREADY....

Voted For: Ransum

u'r dead kid, cuz my shots are bullets not pel-lets
an don..I'll spring an attack that will leave fall and winter jealous
vs
noting

v/Ransum

Voted For: don cardyac

ransum, came pretty hard ...compaired to the other battle i saw u in..but just not quite enought man..

y r u full of shit? u dont even comprehend da battle speeches
even ya hits 'arrive to die on land' like whales on beaches/

vs.

don you came ok, ur verse was poorly structured..but other than that u did okay.

so REWIND to the cypher sTOP you PLAYin' like you SCORIN" somethin'/
but i'm the type to put the red dot to your fore head like a RECORD button/

return the favor or this shit gets deleted

whatever............

upp'in for more votes..............

upp'in for more votes....
plez...

will returnt he favor in voting in one of your battles.......

Voted For: Ransum

nothing

vs

y r u full of shit? u dont even comprehend da battle speeches
even ya hits 'arrive to die on land' like whales on beaches/dont think u stand a chance cuz you saw my spit on the cypher cuz u'r dead
i wont use guns to aim at him, i'll stab him with pencil to fill him up with led/
u'r dead kid, cuz my shots are bullets not pel-lets
an don..I'll spring an attack that will leave fall and winter jealous/

upp'in to end this battle already man.................................

can we get another vote to end this already.......................