Marajuana drop...
 

wakey up blurrey eyeed no change to the taste on my lips
Ths sweet pungent flavour raw like baby breast milk nips
i aint talkin bout that no i ain talkin bout that
im talkin bout the green and the way you react.
Puff Puff give with 'pass the dutche' on the radio
they say it drives you crazy but without ide be insane you know,
strange, coz im a acrophobic but i love gettin high
from the strange delights,the giggle to the dozey eye.
but one thing it the need that deceits me and depletes me.
coz blow leads to coke leads to me been six feet deep

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upppin for feed please..

This is ok @ best.


Its short and not original. Vocab isnt apparent. I feel you could of reached for a lot more originality instead of giving the reader what we would expect in a peice about weed.

Stay droping.

i love smoking the reefer man but still dont compare to o and blow if you know what i mean...pretty lyrical, decent flow, not really original but interesting concept ;), return the fav and leave feed on mine its bout drugs too lol

This could of been way better, pretty short to the flow was decent vocab is ok at best the concept isn't original I feel you could of expanded your flow and your ideas better this also could of been a collabo and it would of made it better for this type of short verse none the less am a pot head so I flet centine part but touch up a bit on everything and keep droping them