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Jesus Escobar vs Maximus Meridius
Battle Rules:
10 - 15 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Basic house rules Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 03-23-05 at 12:21 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Jesus Escobar has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-22-05 11:52 PM.
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Maximus Meridius has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-23-05 12:14 AM.
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Max got that lemon flow, submit sour posts, this cowards dead
Think you garden against me? fuck dirt naps, sleep in my flower bed Plays nice and dick sucks, only way this homo ca' live Blow ya brains on train tracks and give him loco-motives Ur a-nat-ta-me crushed with ease, while ya bitch blow this The anatomy brushed aside with my keys, your bars are shit Ya actions smell wack someone plz give em some mo mints Your final life line went flat, with more name changes then Prince This prick knows it and I got better wordplay to go with And if my punches was heat seekin well, I'd have no hits I don't have any heavy drops?make one when I trip this fat kid I diss-play’d lines like urs to show what wack is I displayed how his verse and Q's sexual preference is the same Come on homo, your crew is like "who?" when I said your name |
I've Beaten This Kid With No Words, Like Instrumentals This Kid Couldn't Spit Straight So He Got Himself Stencils You Beating Me Is, Retards Concentrating On Tight Ropes Skill Is One Of The Things You Lack Something Like Votes I'll Have His Skull Going Both Ways Like His Moms Legs Cracking Every Bone In His Body, Like Broken 2 Eggs.. This Kid Pose To Be Dope? And 15 Lines Is Even Bars? Phat Mic, I Don't Got To Discuss How Whack You Are Call Me God Coz I'm Sonning This Kid Like He's My Own Like Depth Gamblers, He's Mad I'm Taking Away His Home Chances Of Beating Me Is Slim, Like Bush Opening The Border I'm Abusing This Kid Verbally, In Need Or A Restraining Order You Wouldn't Beat Me, If This Site Was Made Of Mexicans Kid Can Get Troop To Write For Him And Wont Win Text Again |
Weerd Upping This Shit Now...............................
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This was feedback posted for Jesus Escobar
JE knows it. Holding it down for NOK. I'm not just saying you took this one. I feel you merked him. This was a good battle tho, but I think JE had more punches.
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Voted For: Maximus Meridius
Maximus Meridrius- You had fairly consistant punches good structure and vocab JE- Most of your lines were pretty played and didn't make sense. Flow and all that was ok but shit wasn't entertaining to read. Over-all- MM won this. JE you need to work on your punches it would be nice to see more complexity. |
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how you about to talk about punches and complexity when you lost a battle? |
^^ No hate man thats just the way I seen it. I possibly misinterpreted your verse.
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This was feedback posted for Jesus Escobar
uppin dis for Jesus....damn i thought you retired...oh well...now you 6-1...lol...
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strait out of retirement....yep...
uppin for some votes... |
Upping This Bish..............................................
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Voted For: Maximus Meridius
wow good fuckin battle fams!!!! ight everything form both was damn good i was impressed by both But it came down to one thing PUNCHES!! ight now Max had some heavy fuckin punches n everyone was a hitter Max damn those were some tight ass fuckin punches very creative given ya a 8/10 on ya punches Jesus good punches ass well but a lil worn out some hit some didnt n that made me sway away from ya verse elevate a lil on ya punches try to get more creative fam good punches for the most part given ya a 7/10 on ya punches structure on both was good easy to keep wit i was feelin both structures Flow for both was good it flowed wit the structure perfectly Personals none that i really saw so none of get that jus elevate on that fams I would liek to see sum multies in both ya verses so elevate on that damn fams a herlla battle i actually enjoyed readin it keep it up u 2 fucki nice battle overall- Punches- Max Flow-Tie Structure- Tie Personals- None Multies- None damn nice battle homies jus elevate on the things i have mentioned above. holla n props to both of you |
Voted For: Jesus Escobar
Wtf?...how did maximus get a vote, fuckin pussy gladiator...but anyways... Overall...Jesus just came harder with better punches, hard hitting metas, and some multis, no really any personals but its whatever... Work on...nothing...wait....my sig...lol.. fav line...the train one...fuckin dope Maximus you came through with a few good punches, didnt like them though sorry, no hate just for once i didnt like any of the punches you had... but um you had lines..and thats what matters...:laugh: Work on having harder hitting punches... I told you both what you did good on, what you need to work on, and so dont try to fuckin DQ this... V/ Jesus Escobar I dont want no fuckin favors...biatch! |
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