Durmil (Blueprint) -Vs- Virt (A.I) Punchline Battle
 

ight house rules....

2 lines
No feeding
No biting or recycling
no d/r and hate votes

check in and drop


Closed... minimum lines for a battle is 6 lines

check ill drop in a sec....

ya no hate but here we go

this twit wishes to hinder me? only spit that was sick was imaginary
no doubt durmil a biter the only thing hehasn't stolenis a girls virginity

blah...|I am Virt|I am Ill|

^^^a biter? man thats just disrespectful....

Virt in text your shit is weak, your scared making a pain for it..
Soil your pants so much i could add water and create a rain forest!

uppin for votes

Is this a crew battle?

Virt: The Bar Didn't Have Flow To It And It Really Wasn't That Good Of A Punch.

Durmil: Punch Had A Flow To It. It Was A Decent Punch,more Then What Virt Came With

Vote=durmil

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

it took to 2 min to read...so i'll read 2 min of your battle....

Virt in text your shit is weak, your scared making a pain for it..
Soil your pants so much i could add water and create a rain forest!

wow that was weak i wasnt feelin that too much
first line didnt hit to hard...nothin interesting..jus a line
second line...i didnt really get that either it was kinda stupid
but good job fam...... 4.5/10


this twit wishes to hinder me? only spit that was sick was imaginary
no doubt durmil a biter the only thing hehasn't stolenis a girls virginity

this was an ok punch
first line hit pretty hard good vocab....good wordplay
second line i was kinda feelin it...accually it was rather good
good closin linel... 7/10

vote:VIRT

its called creativity state, first bar set-up (callin his text weak), second line soil=piss himself....wow

Durmil:i liked that soil line lmao.. was kinda funny.. id give it a 7.3/10



VIRT:hmm.. first line was coo.. but that virginity line is pretty played, and i wasent feeling the words you chose to to rhyme.. Imaginary and Virginity arent my favs.. If you would have rhymed it better, then it wouldnt have mattter if it was played lol, cause it owulda sounded tight.. Vascinity, hinder me, and Virginity woulda been dope rhyming words to use in this punch.. just some feedback.. 6/10 for potential

Good job to both...

Vote:Durmil
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134401
^You know what to do..

this twit wishes to hinder me? only spit that was sick was imaginary
no doubt durmil a biter the only thing hehasn't stolenis a girls virginity
~hmmmm ok typos kinda messed it up.......5/10 not that hard hittin...

Virt in text your shit is weak, your scared making a pain for it..
Soil your pants so much i could add water and create a rain forest!
~hmmmmmm hits kinda hard....pretty nice wordplay wit soil rainforrest....7/10


v/Durmil

3-1 uppin.......

uppin again....................