upfront vs proverse
 

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Check in by: 08-29-04 at 08:56 PM

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upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 10:33 AM.

i gotta kid whose very sick and needs ta b treated/
i oughta spit a verse ta em ta sho that his ass will b defeated/
and wen BaM meets pSa u wont b nicely greeted/
insted ya wish ya was home takin shots while ya dreamin/

but fuck da shots in ya sleep this is real life nigga/
u come to our crew actin hard ya gunna get da trigga/
u sumthin like a fake ass thug livin off ya pops six figya/

dis bitch nigga, wit his name proverse/
tries ta act hard but wen i stomped em he said his toe hurt/(hah)
mayne ya name is is sumthin like an opposite it should b "noverse"/
cuz the only lines that u spit that make sense r the ones u rehearse/

faggot wheres ya crew i thought they had ya back/
now its u on our whole crew u startin ta have a heart attack/
u left hung ta dry lookin like a towel rack/
i aint george bush but this is lookin sumthin like iraq/

boi we takin ova diss site/
dont get scared the only shot u eva took was from a mesquito bite/(haha)

ya whole crew softa than a pillow fight/
plus yall cant touch us like ultraviolet light/
u think u packin heat nigga lemme ignite/

ill sho ya a heatwave jus open ya eyes/
now ya prayin and wishin y0o ass was baptized/
the heats too much now ya sayin ya las goodbyes/
and the blood has filled ya lungs thier startin ta capsize/////


its ova B A M nigga try ta touch us ~peace~

and wen BaM meets pSa u wont b nicely greeted/
PSA what was i thinkin i meant VIOLENT TYPE LOL

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 01:52 AM.

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no question-how you marked the game with your grade
written i red ink- simblizin failure and you neva fail too still link
words reveresed now- "upfront" ironictly "backdown"under pain
looked in the word mirror and thought of a idea for a name
don't run and take these hits so you won't be shamed-in fact
by lettin everybody know you go hit while you turnin your back

*thats my verse*

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explainations:
1.(words reveresed now- "upfront" ironictly "backdown"under pain
looked in the word mirror and thought of a idea for a name)
up-down
front-back (upfront- backdown) reversed because
his name of oppisite of what he really is-

2.(don't run and take these hits so you won't be shamed-in fact
by lettin everybody know you go hit while you turnin your back)

*he has jada in his sig
and jadakiss said its shameful to die with bulllets in your back
(which simbilises you were running)


yes explinations WERE neccery ppl keep sayin
i dont have personals-
and like i always say these arent prewrites
its this ne dude who votes on all my battles
and say they were prewrites its annoyin as fuck


~1~

This was feedback posted for upfront
 

ok good shit both of you i really think you should have spit more pro but both had good shit

Voted For: upfront

is proverse in our crew i dont thinks o its all good upfront came harder with dem punches and flow nice mayne and proverse why u didnt make more lines mayne u should cuz upfront ripped u

u could of made more lines with dem punches and personal but u didnt sorry mayne my votes goes to upfront

~peace~

This was feedback posted for ProVerse
 

okok it like dis

as much as i wanted to vote against upfront: i can't not only cause the post but al cause he was alround better.

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Voted For: ProVerse

Proverse Killed It
His Verse Was Short n Sweet...Nice Structure, Hit Hard With Some Okay Punches
7/10 For The Verse

Upfront, You Dropped Alot More Lines Than Proverse So In All Reality, You Should Have Killed It, Elevate Ya Vocab n Step Ya Punches Up With Some Humour n You'll Be A Force To Be Rekoned Wit'

Nice Flowin Ya'll, I Appreciate The Time n Effort n The Skill...

Return The Favor Yo n Vote On My Currently Open Battles

^ thanx for votin mayn ima return the favor


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^^^^^^uppin mayne thanks fa da votes keep em comin

ill return da favor

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin mayne if ya vote ill return da favor