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20. Premanition Vs. 45. Archeologist
Rules:
Battles open Friday Night At 12:00 AM Eastern Time Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time Verse's Due By Tuesday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday At 12:00 Am Eastern Time 10 Lines No Biting No Feeding No Recycling The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney! Good Luck! |
Check Hoe..
Pz. |
checkin in.............................
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Hmmm, Metaphorically Speaking Yeh ’Arch Is Dead’…
Im ‘Bright’ In Head, You Prefer It ‘Dark’ Instead… Inbred To Bitches, Always Doubted Their ‘Intelligence’…(a.i) Say You Runnin Shit, Yet More Flat Footed Than Elephants… Getting In The Spirit, Providin My Punches ‘Gift’-‘Rapped’… Kid In Audio, But Flow More Fluent With Disc Scratched… Bitch Slapped And Take Pleasure In Bringin Back Reality… Ur Always Droppin ‘Rash’, Dope Lines Must Be An Allergy… Cheated Me Out Of Title, With Some Wack Ass Rule Recital…(*) Reppin That You ‘Champion’… ……Put ‘Moderator’ Back Cos That’s The Part That’s Vital…(**) |
explanation for last bar =
(*) – beat him on votes in punchline final, but he (moderator of forum) dq’d me for some postin too many times in thread. (**) – Used to have moderator below his name. |
Blah the fuck at no Feeding..
i could of whored his whole verse straight off.. Damn fuck 4fill.. Gonna key a verse now.. Pz. |
Yes its true i predicted one of us to take this tourny..
..lookin at your 1st round verse.. ..your just pavin the way and lyin down for me.. Prem's seen his future and he says its bright.. ..So keep heading down the tunnel.. .. and dont stop before the light.. i beat you before and yes it was pretty much down to luck.. ...i already smoked this herb...so now ill just Kick his Butt.. You didnt go far last tourny and im expectin the same again.. .. if your straight why you on your knees worshipin em..? -Rv Dreamteam- was desperate so got you to make the numbers son.. .. i like it how you make a list of your weak and old accomplishments.. Ok forgot about this so just thre summit quick together.. So watever happens my Prediction will win the tourny G'luck Prem. Pz. |
Its fine if this doesn't count, i'm just showing the voting council how to vote flow...you know how to but they are pretty much just voting on names so far...its ridiculous
Prem first... Hmmm, Metaphorically Speaking Yeh ’Arch Is Dead’… Im ‘Bright’ In Head, You Prefer It ‘Dark’ Instead… 5...decent, getting us in the mood, creating tone... Inbred To Bitches, Always Doubted Their ‘Intelligence’…(a.i) Say You Runnin Shit, Yet More Flat Footed Than Elephants… 8.5 haha, good shit, something original...i liked this shit Getting In The Spirit, Providin My Punches ‘Gift’-‘Rapped’… Kid In Audio, But Flow More Fluent With Disc Scratched… 7 decent, just another punch... Bitch Slapped And Take Pleasure In Bringin Back Reality… Ur Always Droppin ‘Rash’, Dope Lines Must Be An Allergy… 8.5 ahah, good shit again, wit...learn from this kiddies... Cheated Me Out Of Title, With Some Wack Ass Rule Recital…(*) Reppin That You ‘Champion’… ……Put ‘Moderator’ Back Cos That’s The Part That’s Vital…(**) 9.5 this is a closer...shit is hot, you can feel his anger. This and Schemas are the best verses Ive read so far in the first round, you came really nice, punches were on, well atleast two were standouts...it seemed like you really wanted this victory, good shit now Arch Yes its true i predicted one of us to take this tourny.. ..lookin at your 1st round verse.. ..your just pavin the way and lyin down for me.. 4 wtf i shtat...seriously...not very original, not even really effort... Prem's seen his future and he says its bright.. ..So keep heading down the tunnel.. .. and dont stop before the light.. 8 this was a decent punch, i liked this...good stuff, good but a lil played...read spinoffs, anyways good shit i beat you before and yes it was pretty much down to luck.. ...i already smoked this herb...so now ill just Kick his Butt.. 4...hmmm...wow...that's all i have to sya, you are better then this You didnt go far last tourny and im expectin the same again.. .. if your straight why you on your knees worshipin em..? 5...hmm that's not really a punch, kinda lame...so played -Rv Dreamteam- was desperate so got you to make the numbers son.. .. i like it how you make a list of your weak and old accomplishments.. 2...that's not a punch either... you are better then this, that's all i have to say Vote Prem |
Im letting JPoll vote on all battles if he would like to he is now part of the voting council since he isnt bias towards names
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uppin some more votes up in here...........
pz |
premanition :
Hmmm, Metaphorically Speaking Yeh ’Arch Is Dead’… Im ‘Bright’ In Head, You Prefer It ‘Dark’ Instead… ^^decent wordplay wack punch 4/10 Inbred To Bitches, Always Doubted Their ‘Intelligence’…(a.i) Say You Runnin Shit, Yet More Flat Footed Than Elephants… ^^lol good punch 7/10 Getting In The Spirit, Providin My Punches ‘Gift’-‘Rapped’… Kid In Audio, But Flow More Fluent With Disc Scratched… ^^dope bar 8/10 Bitch Slapped And Take Pleasure In Bringin Back Reality… Ur Always Droppin ‘Rash’, Dope Lines Must Be An Allergy… ^^ehh decent punch good meta 6/10 Cheated Me Out Of Title, With Some Wack Ass Rule Recital…(*) Reppin That You ‘Champion’… ……Put ‘Moderator’ Back Cos That’s The Part That’s Vital…(**) ^^decent closer good personals 7/10 overall : 32/50 (64%) Archeologist : Yes its true i predicted one of us to take this tourny.. ..lookin at your 1st round verse.. ..your just pavin the way and lyin down for me.. ^^dope opener 8/10 Prem's seen his future and he says its bright.. ..So keep heading down the tunnel.. .. and dont stop before the light.. ^^ good bar 7/10 i beat you before and yes it was pretty much down to luck.. ...i already smoked this herb...so now ill just Kick his Butt.. ^^ lol @ kick his butt good bar 6/10 You didnt go far last tourny and im expectin the same again.. .. if your straight why you on your knees worshipin em..? ^^wack 3/10 -Rv Dreamteam- was desperate so got you to make the numbers son.. .. i like it how you make a list of your weak and old accomplishments.. ^^doesnt rhyme at all 2/10 overall : 26/50 (52%) vote: premanition, he came harder overall and your last bar killed you archeologist |
Prem:
Hmmm, Metaphorically Speaking Yeh ’Arch Is Dead’… Im ‘Bright’ In Head, You Prefer It ‘Dark’ Instead… lol, didn't hit hard, but good opener Inbred To Bitches, Always Doubted Their ‘Intelligence’…(a.i) Say You Runnin Shit, Yet More Flat Footed Than Elephants… this was nice Getting In The Spirit, Providin My Punches ‘Gift’-‘Rapped’… Kid In Audio, But Flow More Fluent With Disc Scratched… dope Bitch Slapped And Take Pleasure In Bringin Back Reality… Ur Always Droppin ‘Rash’, Dope Lines Must Be An Allergy… lmao, great Cheated Me Out Of Title, With Some Wack Ass Rule Recital…(*) Reppin That You ‘Champion’… ……Put ‘Moderator’ Back Cos That’s The Part That’s Vital…(**) good to Arch: Yes its true i predicted one of us to take this tourny.. ..lookin at your 1st round verse.. ..your just pavin the way and lyin down for me.. nice Prem's seen his future and he says its bright.. ..So keep heading down the tunnel.. .. and dont stop before the light.. ok good i beat you before and yes it was pretty much down to luck.. ...i already smoked this herb...so now ill just Kick his Butt.. meh, not good You didnt go far last tourny and im expectin the same again.. .. if your straight why you on your knees worshipin em..? gay and played -Rv Dreamteam- was desperate so got you to make the numbers son.. .. i like it how you make a list of your weak and old accomplishments.. how did this rhyme? not even a peronel v/Premenition, he had a better drop |
Voting Ends Now Premanition Wins 3-0
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