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Dabatos 10-27-04 02:48 AM

Do you remember ur first Rhyme or bar?
 
If you don't remember ur first..jst remember the rhymes u remember from way back :)

mine:

Man, forget you...you nothin..your jst like jack in jill....
U suck man, just go back, back, just back to mil..

very wack^^ lol

back to mil means back to middle skewl lol

Logic The Goonie 10-27-04 02:51 AM

unfortunately i do remember this pathetic little bar of mine. :(

I got money like its on tap
I have more of it than on songs which i rap


:thumbup:
dead serious

Alien 10-27-04 02:57 AM

my 1st line:

fuck this you're wack...
your mom's got.......

^^^^this was a freestyle battle at school, my very first battle, I choked after "got"..... :(

Parallel 10-27-04 03:00 AM

you dont wanna know how wack i was back then...

Alien 10-27-04 03:02 AM

^^^it's better to tell us...when i have sumthing to say i see a councilor. :thumbup:

Parallel 10-27-04 03:11 AM

lol i dont remember exacly what i did back then but...heres a try of what i did...
the devils cry huants my gurl in her dream...
only on a seam she blanses on a one sided beam...
^^^that was better then i can do back then i was way worse then that

Alien 10-27-04 03:14 AM

sounds like a topical match you were busting....?

Parallel 10-27-04 03:15 AM

no i was busting normal battles lol i was just stupid didnt understand shit haha

Alien 10-27-04 03:17 AM

ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm, lol????

i want to hear other people's first bar

Terumoto 10-27-04 05:03 AM

my first bar..

Im in a fright, docs is handlin somethin.... he might chop it!!
WHAT! check this out.. my umbilical chord has a MIC on it?!


^Multis since conception :thumbup:

K.ontroverz.Y 10-27-04 05:29 AM

lol alright niggaz check my first rhyme

im stronger then a lion but faster then a cheetah
want to fight me, i'll beat ya

^dopeness defined.......call P.diddy we gotta hit on our hands

that was in grade 4...see i was blessed with the talent

Mad Dog 10-27-04 06:09 AM

TonySelf...ima put u on my surgical shelf,
Cut you up deal yoself and shuffle urself,

/\ 1st battle verse on RV

Satan 10-27-04 06:28 AM

My first line.

Fuck you asshole, Ill rape and torment your soul
Slit your wrists for you, then impale you on a pole

K.ontroverz.Y 10-27-04 06:32 AM

ur fuckin ugly ^ fuck u satanic bitch ass...Aod LOL

Dirty Nigga 10-27-04 06:35 AM

my first ever battle was on rv
an the only time i ever rhyme is on rv
an i think my first line was sumthin like.........

''dogg all i wanna do is chill with the dead prezidents
u cant trace me cause this is murder with no evidence''

somthin like that on an open mic key i did


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