BPK vs Terumoto
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 1

Check in by: 11-25-07 at 10:57 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Terumoto has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-25-07 07:58 PM.

BPK has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-25-07 08:02 PM.

terumoto/
he chops no hoes/
probly because this guys a homo/
hes like why fuck chicks
when i suck dick/
and can make 2 to 5 bucks quick/
u might as well give me ur boo/
becuz im stealing ur hunny like winnie the poo/
i get more head, then pillows/
fill u with led,i kill bros/
u aint got no real flows/
2 the garbage ur respect will go/
man i got a gat here/
u just a fag queer/
ill open this pussy like a papshmeir/

Who is this dude? I don't wanna play games with him,
to be honest, it doesn't bother me, just take the win.
This dude sends me a PM when I'm chilling n' about to get high,
Says he'll rip me, I don't wanna make a liar outta the guy.
So go ahead, shit'll be fine, you could rip me with rhymes a million times...
You're up against someone who can be run through without blinking an eye.

Voted For: Terumoto

how ironic....this verse actually had far better structure...i choose the absence of punches over the presence of retarded ones.

so i guess i win i sent u a pm becuz im bored and high and just wanna rip sum1 for fun if u were so scared 2 battle u didnt have 2 accept

its a battle not a english class im looking 2 diss people not 2 have a perfect structure but if u think his verse was better thats ur opinion and i respect that but u have 2 remember its a battle

I'm giving you a gift.

i battle people on the streets 4 fun and what im used 2 is what u say not how u say it.

This was feedback posted for BPK
 

damn this shit is depressing.......damn...i'm speechless.....

Voted For: Terumoto

Wow BPK, you need a lot of elevation, but I'ma try and help you with a few things. First of all, your bars are too short. Expand your bars and throw a little complexity in there. Any fuck/dick/suck lines are PLAYED, unless you can amazingly throw a new twist to them. Hit up some battles on here or google some, and see what it takes to make good punches.

Keep elevating!

Voted For: Terumoto

terumoto/
he chops no hoes/
probly because this guys a homo/
hes like why fuck chicks
when i suck dick/
and can make 2 to 5 bucks quick/
u might as well give me ur boo/
becuz im stealing ur hunny like winnie the poo/
i get more head, then pillows/
fill u with led,i kill bros/
u aint got no real flows/
2 the garbage ur respect will go/
man i got a gat here/
u just a fag queer/
ill open this pussy like a papshmeir/

you have no style no punches...
fic your structure and read what you write before you drop it plez... 0 outta 10

vs

Who is this dude? I don't wanna play games with him,
to be honest, it doesn't bother me, just take the win.
simple no punch...

This dude sends me a PM when I'm chilling n' about to get high,
Says he'll rip me, I don't wanna make a liar outta the guy.
WTF?? weak but you dont need to try thou but still lets be serious??

So go ahead, shit'll be fine, you could rip me with rhymes a million times...
You're up against someone who can be run through without blinking an eye.

this is sad...

you only win because you wasnt as bad as the other dude...

BUT SERIOUSLY WHY ARE YOU BATTLING HIM??
BECAUSE YOU KNOW YOU WOULD OF GOT THE EZ WIN??

IS THAT WHY YOU DUCKED ME WHEN I CALLED YOU OUT BEFORE???

so you only taking on noobs in battles thats wack fam for-real..

i wanna see how you gonna do agenist some real compitition WORD LIKE MYSELF....

just a friendly battle no beef or noting i just hate when dudes who got nice records battle noobs and not no-one else what do's that say about you??

either you not confident or you lost ya touch seriously...

are you retarded? he clearly didn't instigate this battle nor care if he won or not

This was feedback posted for Terumoto
 

...wow...I really don't know how to vote on this battle...