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Accelerate 01-18-04 01:36 PM

Lm vs. SkiddZ
 
You guys already know the rules.
Blind Spit Beyotch..
I'll be keyin up right now.

LM 01-18-04 01:40 PM

Any number of lines is it...........................

Accelerate 01-18-04 01:42 PM

Yeah any number of Lines..Im going to start keyin My verse Up Right Now...Lets not take forever with the verses

Accelerate 01-18-04 01:53 PM

HmmZ..

Lm Is Just a wannabe, And He wanna be havin his dick in his Hand
And If I really want to focus Upon Personals...I Could Just Type..Stan
And All Rb Agrees, Your Not even that great, all You do is beat whack kids
You want proof,You have All these wins, and your not on the Elite List
Lm is straight Garbage, An Artificially Created, First Crack Baby to be..
We all know He's Gay..Closest to Pussy he been was a C-Section...
And I'm talkin bout His Posts On Rb!
And His Crew Instant, Just filled with all these wannabe Vets no one hails
He has Dick Riders All over his Ass, Like They Was Ridin a Tail...
Drag Queen in a Half, Stay trying on The Female's CLothes..
You come tight...
But thats Only Jerkin off In Mom's Pantyhose
Lets Face it..Your Whack Dude, Your Merking dealt is already Enough
And You Need To help Elevate Your Man..
Elevate His Dick,I mean, And give him the Finishing Touch!

LM 01-18-04 02:10 PM

[I]I'm a experiment with this bitch...

You cant beat vets, just six herbs, but you crushed 'em
So to blow up you need spontanious human combustion
And as for vets, you pushed 'em til 13 of 'em murked you
I'm number 14.........I'm a jump on the bandwagon too
And it's true, your just a kid cant use dope words usefully
Bitch, your only 14 years old you've barely reached puberty
And truthfully, your gay, you love rap coz of roc-a-fella
And wacknass spins around you like helicopter propella's
As for you mom, tell her your just a mutherfuckin disgrace
Enterin rap, tryin to start a beef wid me, your outta place
And it's a waste of lines if I come hard at you, with fire
Coz you just an adolescent kid, masterbatin over mya (avy)
I wont go higher than 14 lines coz theres really no need
You just a wack bitch with 13 losses, now thats just greed

Accelerate 01-18-04 02:25 PM

You started off really good...But then...You just fucking lost it...You did come better than I expected, but still, You fucked yourself over after the first 4 lines..but whatever.

LM 01-18-04 02:31 PM

Damn I forgot to put the rest of the italics code thing in....oh well

.:K:. 01-18-04 02:33 PM

^wtf you didnt need to say that man......................................he didnt break your shit down......stop crying............nice spit lm................................likewise skiddz but shut up.....pz

Accelerate 01-18-04 02:36 PM

First off..I have been on this site longer than both of you. I am trying to help him elevate. Criticism...If he gets the d/r votes, he'll never become better.

LM 01-18-04 02:48 PM

Your helpin me elevate.....your 6-13. You came into our crew talkin shit to help me elevate. Yeah Ok whatever

Oxygen 01-18-04 02:56 PM

Skiddz's Verse

Lm Is Just a wannabe, And He wanna be havin his dick in his Hand
And If I really want to focus Upon Personals...I Could Just Type..Stan
LOL 8/10
And All Rb Agrees, Your Not even that great, all You do is beat whack kids
You want proof,You have All these wins, and your not on the Elite List
Good Personal, Affective 7/10
Lm is straight Garbage, An Artificially Created, First Crack Baby to be..
We all know He's Gay..Closest to Pussy he been was a C-Section...
And I'm talkin bout His Posts On Rb!
This Had No Flow But It Was A Good Punch 7/10
And His Crew Instant, Just filled with all these wannabe Vets no one hails
He has Dick Riders All over his Ass, Like They Was Ridin a Tail...
Nah....6/10
Drag Queen in a Half, Stay trying on The Female's CLothes..
You come tight...
But thats Only Jerkin off In Mom's Pantyhose
Played 6/10
Lets Face it..Your Whack Dude, Your Merking dealt is already Enough
And You Need To help Elevate Your Man..
Elevate His Dick,I mean, And give him the Finishing Touch!
Not Bad 7/10

41/120 = 34%
LM

You cant beat vets, just six herbs, but you crushed 'em
So to blow up you need spontanious human combustion
Ehh It's Ok 7.5/10
And as for vets, you pushed 'em til 13 of 'em murked you
I'm number 14.........I'm a jump on the bandwagon too
Not Bad 7.5/10
And it's true, your just a kid cant use dope words usefully
Bitch, your only 14 years old you've barely reached puberty
WTF...Filler 1/10
And truthfully, your gay, you love rap coz of roc-a-fella
And wacknass spins around you like helicopter propella's
Blah 5/10
As for you mom, tell her your just a mutherfuckin disgrace
Enterin rap, tryin to start a beef wid me, your outta place
More Filler 1/10
And it's a waste of lines if I come hard at you, with fire
Coz you just an adolescent kid, masterbatin over mya (avy)
Was This Supposed To Be A Punch? 2/10
I wont go higher than 14 lines coz theres really no need
You just a wack bitch with 13 losses, now thats just greed
No 1/10

25/140 17%

Skiddz Wins.....
Lm Started Off Ok Then
He Went Down Like Prostitutes............

Skiddz Came Iight Had A Few Played
Lines And What Ever He Shows Signs
Of Potental.

Lm First Four Lines Were Ok But
The He Had Nothing But Filler....

inspire 01-18-04 03:15 PM

BOTH OF YOU!.. Stay away from masturbation and yo mama punches unless in very special situations..

SkiddZ -
Quote:
And All Rb Agrees, Your Not even that great, all You do is beat whack kids
You want proof,You have All these wins, and your not on the Elite List
^That t'was a good punch but could've been worded better.

LM -
Wow can you say filler?
Quote:
And it's true, your just a kid cant use dope words usefully
Bitch, your only 14 years old you've barely reached puberty
And truthfully, your gay, you love rap coz of roc-a-fella
And wacknass spins around you like helicopter propella's
As for you mom, tell her your just a mutherfuckin disgrace
Enterin rap, tryin to start a beef wid me, your outta place
And it's a waste of lines if I come hard at you, with fire
Coz you just an adolescent kid, masterbatin over mya (avy)
I wont go higher than 14 lines coz theres really no need
You just a wack bitch with 13 losses, now thats just greed
^Horrible. Go to WEC and look at the punchline faq.

*EDIT*
Oh yeah..

Vote - Skiddz

Mystik Mind 01-18-04 03:32 PM

^ I Cant Quite Make Out Your Avvy...;)

SkiddZ Took This By Far. Punches Were Good, If He Had Worded Some Of Them Better, They Wud Have Been Dope. Concepts Were Nice And Not As Played As LM's. LM I Dont Know You, But Work On Your Punches And The Wording Of Them.

Vote - LM

:)

LM 01-18-04 05:42 PM

Wow......it sounded Ok in my head. Oh well, back to the drawin board for me

Tsar Casm 01-18-04 06:42 PM

Mystik said SkiddZ took it but then said his vote was LM..lol..but ok..it's pointless to reiterate what everyone else said..LM..statred nice, then went downhill..SkiddZ stayed consistent..Vote-SkiddZ


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