.:DeAtH vIsIoN:. vs J Gutta
 

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Check in by: 01-17-05 at 11:40 PM

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.:DeAtH vIsIoN:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 09:41 PM.

J Gutta has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 09:42 PM.

[center]ayo
wen iam battelin you Death is in my Vision,
pop shots at cha right, and have ya left twitchin,
break off ya legs and have ya whole chest shiftin//
ill fill ya head wit clips,& it aint a new hair style,
i hit him, he can hit back ill give him a fair trial//
ill spray ya whip,n man ill even air brush ya shoes,
bring em all (Lc) nigga ill even pair rush ya crews,
ur obitchuary in local paper, i dont care fuck tha news,
i role aroun wit dunks, nigga it means i tuck tha duece//
see u at night, stick you and stick it in deeper,
till ma hand in and you can see tha grim reeper//
break off ya shins, and have you standin short,
i got tha duece, you a law suit, you always land in court//
wen iam at u iam a Let u see tha death within,
so check all iam sayin is F...U..C...K death vision//

haha dis nigga want it...come on now be real he probably had his shit written or somethin but i dont give a fuck. it's goin down


He's yellin out "416 416 bitch toronto"
fuck canda i'll run across tha border pronto
just to bust ya jaw nigga fuck ya'lls laws
everybody dissin canada just watch WWE RAW
u fuckin maple leaf shootin off at tha mouth gettin cocky
only way you could beat me is if we playin hockey
das a shot @ all of ya people u lil pop wayne gretzke
tha only thing weaker than u? umm tha NY JET's D
become one with Randy and catch that punch pants up
tha mounties is my hype men they only lines HANDS UP
nigga you been on my crews dick ever since day one
just like we birthed you...no wonder I call you son
he just wants to be one of us ridin our cocks like bikes
I'll make his head flop when speakin like Kyle's brother Ike
ya flow is thin as ice and unstructured just like ya bars
lets be real only thing killin in Toronto is SARs
ya shit wont get off tha ground i won't give u a inch
everyone hates canadians y u think yall lost Vince?

nice drop uppin

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Voted For: .:DeAtH vIsIoN:.

one sided battle.....

Personals- death killed J in this catagory...this probably won it for him in my opinion....all the shit about canada was fuckin halarious....J gutta really didnt have any in his verse...so that really hurt him

Punches- both had some decent punches in their verses...but death came harder with his

Multis- J Gutta by far

wordplay- None

Opener-both were weak...but J got this

Closer - lol no question about this...death..the vince carter line was too nice....all that J said was fuck deathvision...nothin special

Originality- deathvision by far....J your verse was pretty basic



overall- death got this with his personal, punches, originality.....his verse was just on a whole different level.....good battle.....PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR....link in sig

Voted For: .:DeAtH vIsIoN:.

ok j gunplay is a nono in battles its gay and madd played aint much more you can say with it fl ow was good punches also were nice but you failed to hit your oppenant hard cuz you really lacked personals saying his name aint a personal .death good here structure nice and disses also good personals you just need to word you punches better they were good so werent the personals but they couldve been much better .
death basically wins to me with better punches as well as personals his personals hit hard while j aint have none and that won it for death.
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Voted For: .:DeAtH vIsIoN:.

Death- Alright homie, You had some good punches, flowed pretty well. Wordplay was "eh" ok, still needs elevation. Personals was good. Punches i have to say you pretty much elevated a little bit, but not on the level of an, Vet.



J-guttah- What happen man? Punches wasnt good fam, they had some effect but not good homie. It flowed pretty well, Wordplay was good. The punches however was "ok" not that much effort into it homie.





overall= This was an "ok" battle, both needs elevation. J-guttah your punches it did had some effect, some were played, some were very creative. Wordplay was good. Death vision, you've much elevated, just focus on wordplays and multi'z, anyway, you had some effective punches with some good personals in there. I liked the way you diss his town and his former town. I have to vote Death visions, cause his punches had some effect, j-guttah not the usual you, but your punches didnt come hard as his.

peace.

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Voted For: .:DeAtH vIsIoN:.

I felt death on this one more I just was not feeling the bold letters homes but death had good imagry good vocab opener-closure was good his hits where iight a little and his multis where good also but overall he flowed better with me no hate. ;) and ret the fav on my links peace.

Voted For: .:DeAtH vIsIoN:.

Demn LOL Death Took This Battle by A Long Shot And JGutta Arent You More experienced than him LOL Damn

n e ways
Death vIsIoN
He's yellin out "416 416 bitch toronto"
fuck canda i'll run across tha border pronto
^^^^^^^^STR8 diss to that nigz country LOL

Best Middle bar
nigga you been on my crews dick ever since day one
just like we birthed you...no wonder I call you son
Thats So True Ive been Watching This Guy

best Closing
ya shit wont get off tha ground i won't give u a inch
everyone hates canadians y u think yall lost Vince?
^^^^^^^^^The bar Is Nuiff Said ....damn LOL

J Gutta
wen iam battelin you Death is in my Vision,
pop shots at cha right, and have ya left twitchin,
^^^^ I dunno It was Kinda weak

Best Midlle Punch
ill spray ya whip,n man ill even air brush ya shoes,
bring em all (Lc) nigga ill even pair rush ya crews,
Not All Dat But The Best In Ya verse

Closing bar
wen iam at u iam a Let u see tha death within,
so check all iam sayin is F...U..C...K death vision//
WTF is that it Shouldnt of been your Closing

So Sorry Jgutta But He takes this battle with ease

Peace