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Sonny Barz. 08-03-07 03:30 PM

*~F@M3-Iz~* vs Sonny Barz.
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-06-07 at 03:30 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 08-03-07 09:55 PM

*~F@M3-Iz~* has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-07 09:55 PM.

*~F@M3-Iz~* 08-05-07 10:56 AM

Ok....

The Best? Nah Homie U Got It Twisted, I'm Gon Put The Demise 2 Ya Tribe...
Put The Surprise 2 Ya Lies, Watch Fame Demolish This Guy...
Its Rd. 2, I'm Laughin At This Cats Rhyme...
Sonny Is Dead, Now All I Gotta Do Is Show Em The Flatline...
I Blast On In, Don't U Understand I'm The Next To Win...
And Sonny Is Like 'O', Kuz Ya Career Is 'Next-To-N'...(End)
See Homie Your Pussy, I'm Lettin Ya Kno Now Nigga Don't Push Me...
Ya Barz Is 'Ass', No Wonder It Smell Like U 'B.een E.atin S.uch T.ushy'...
I'm Takin Ya Crown, U Could Never Do This Punchline Thing...
The Battle Over, I Just Assasinated The Punchline King...

System 08-06-07 03:30 PM

Sonny Barz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-07 03:30 PM.

Sonny Barz. 08-07-07 02:05 PM

ya WRITTENS ARE DEAD, so you'll never be VISIONED AHEAD
cuz we know 'FAME IS BEHIND BARZ' like IMPRISONED CELEBS
y SPIT IN THE THREAD? like yu really gon ROAST ME, FRIEND
and 'AIR IS INVISIBLE', but dats not why u 'DON'T SEE WINS'
why PALM FIFTHS? my punches explode, i got BOMB FIST
you NON-SICK, my lines easily 'KILL FAM' like JOHN LIST*
this NONSENSE! u FLOW BRITTLE, i'll beat u SO SIMPLE
cuz you ain't 'GOT NO BARS' like 'phones wit NO SIGNAL'
I beat half ya crew already, without tryin to SLAY, SON
so u just another 'GUNNER' i snatched da gun AWAY FROM!


John List killed his family. Google him.

Good Luck..

Ransum 08-07-07 02:16 PM

This was feedback posted for *~F@M3-Iz~*
 
ya WRITTENS ARE DEAD, so you'll never be VISIONED AHEAD
cuz we know 'FAME IS BEHIND BARZ' like IMPRISONED CELEBS
aight..

y SPIT IN THE THREAD? like yu really gon ROAST ME, FRIEND
and 'AIR IS INVISIBLE', but dats not why u 'DON'T SEE WINS'
aight..

why PALM FIFTHS? my punches explode, i got BOMB FIST
you NON-SICK, my lines easily 'KILL FAM' like JOHN LIST*
flow nice.. multis aight... punch is eeh only cuz i aint know who was john list...

this NONSENSE! u FLOW BRITTLE, i'll beat u SO SIMPLE
cuz you ain't 'GOT NO BARS' like 'phones wit NO SIGNAL'
aight...

I beat half ya crew already, without tryin to SLAY, SON
so u just another 'GUNNER' i snatched da gun AWAY FROM!
aight ending...

but u aint beat me...
matter of fact u aint even show fam but u def showd to battle my crew-mates lol.... much respect thou fam...

decent verse... ya punches lack's a bit of impact but all around aight verse...



NEXT...

The Best? Nah Homie U Got It Twisted, I'm Gon Put The Demise 2 Ya Tribe...
Put The Surprise 2 Ya Lies, Watch Fame Demolish This Guy...
good multis and flow smooth...

Its Rd. 2, I'm Laughin At This Cats Rhyme...
Sonny Is Dead, Now All I Gotta Do Is Show Em The Flatline...
aight..

I Blast On In, Don't U Understand I'm The Next To Win...
And Sonny Is Like 'O', Kuz Ya Career Is 'Next-To-N'...(End)
decent...

See Homie Your Pussy, I'm Lettin Ya Kno Now Nigga Don't Push Me...
Ya Barz Is 'Ass', No Wonder It Smell Like U 'B.een E.atin S.uch T.ushy'...
LOL... HAHA... GOOD PERSONAL....

I'm Takin Ya Crown, U Could Never Do This Punchline Thing...
The Battle Over, I Just Assasinated The Punchline King...
aight ending...

nice verse FAM...
ya flow was smooth...
multis was decent...
punches was decent...
and u had a personal which had me rolling...

nice drop....

this gonna be a close battle... GOOD LUCK FAM....

Fly-E 08-07-07 02:26 PM

This was feedback posted for Sonny Barz.
 
Good stuff fam! Lets try to get this battle won i think u got it!
Good Job Fame Iz!

Sonny Barz. 08-14-07 03:23 PM

Uppinn for votes please! This battle been up for a while. I'm tired of seein it!!


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