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Wicked One vs A.K.A.
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10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting your first Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-30-04 at 11:21 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 11:25 AM.
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Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 11:39 AM.
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man goddamn i don't even no this bitch and i gotta write a fuck verse about him. well fuck it here it goes
you made your name to try and sound like a wicked emcee// but your words ain't going no where when you rappin against me// your just a wicked ONE, while i got about 10 alter egos that could merk you too// i'm just here to make sure you no how really jersey boys do// i'm tired of these cats putting hard or wicked in they name// when their words that the spit don't mean the same// the only thing that shocked me about this battle is that you accepted// when we searched for your skill nothing was found as it was expected// you ain't fucking wicked your use fuckin wack// i spit my verse and you probably won't even have the balls to spit back// weak but had to spit quick |
Dodged ya gun turrets when I surfaced for prey,planned...
To turn ya allies against you,send jud AKA into the wasteland... Where I lurk,marauder,watch me break hands with clay pans... Take a chance,I ain't drunk man maybe you'll last til' my blade plants... Damn straight,I'm sober,caught you offguard when you assaulted... Kicked you hard in the balls,then lifted you towards God's forces... Sandstorms of ethereal proportions... The north winds'll decapitate you if ya neck is braced at the cartilage... Stop bein all in this,I'm indigenous to battlefields and that's for my benefit... Although respondin to your elementary penmanship makes me feel like a degenerate... I'll disperse ettiquette and question in rhetoric can AKA get his against my better script?... While I'm threaded in my hypertext letterman the middle weight of rap battles takes no heavy hits... I'm a soul taker like a dementors lips and as livid as a headmaster in a sex scandal with a 10 yr old ... Broadcasted on every channel from Los Angeles to Tampa ... Til this battles canceled I'll continue to grapple with all the charges... Yeah I'm on a learning curve, new tings every day and every new time... I learnt today ya slurred curses are just excuses for rhymes... Ya ain't the Carpenter but ya got some large wood far up ya orifice... So far inside you'd actually thoink you started enjoying it... Acting hard when ya see me destroying it won't ever get ya far... Ya effect is largely like firing BB pellets at Kevlar... Fucking messed-up stark preacher, this teacher'll tell ya where ya seat is yours are naive curses against a university thesis... |
Damn...i thought you was gonna drop long....cuz you posted 10 Lines - Unlimited lines...meaning how many you want lol....so i did a long verse.....sorry bout it being long....anyways UPPIN .....LEAVE A LINK if ya want.....1
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Voted For: A.K.A.
this battle came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay both of u had a decent drop nice use of vocab from the both of u. i like both of your structures and your choice of vocab, nice meta's werent really any really strong personals but i felt Ak had the overall harder verse here |
Voted For: Wicked One
Flow = Wicked Rhymes = Wicked Metas = Wicked Personals = AKA Vote = Wicked Oh And AKA Always Asks Me To Vote His Battles Hoping To Get A Yes From Me. Oh And This Is For You Bitch i Got Friends. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ha ha godamn my bad i meant to say "y cause you lost all your battles" but oh well. and don't get it twisted i said vote not vote for me. uppin this battle and gonna dq that hate vote 1
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Voted For: A.K.A.
Wicked One- Decent Verse, Strecthed Bars Tho, Flow Was Good, Vocab Was Good, Punches Hit... Aka- Structure Was Better, Flow Was Not As Good, But Punches Were Better And Personals Were Better Punches- Aka Personals- Aka Flow- Wicked One Wordplay- Wicked One Structure- Aka Originality- Tie Multis - Wicked One... Final Vote---- Aka Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...77&page=1&pp=15 |
Voted For: Wicked One
check it out AKA nah wasnt that good straight up your flow ok structure ehh punches ehhh and personals a lil AKA- Structure- 5/10 Punches: 5/10 Personals: 6/10 Creativity: 5/10 openor: 4/10 Closer: 5/10 Overall: 30/60 Wicked: Structure: 5/10 Openor: 6/10 Closer: 5/10 Personals: 6/10 Punches: 6/10 creativity: 6/10 Overall: 34/60 Vote wicked one |
UPPIN...........Leave a link if ya want........................1
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Voted For: A.K.A.
AKA, told you once before, dont use the //'s in your drop, okay punches, no multis...a couple of ok personals...structure a little stretched at time, but good flow Wicked, Whats with all the big words...just seemed like you were trying to show off with the vocab way to much or you were using a rhyming dictionary...i dont like looking at verses where i have to flip through a dictionary almost every line..decent punches tho...stretched out lines that messed with the flow |
uppin
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Voted For: A.K.A.
you won just saying ok Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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