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Flows...vs...Eric89 -vote-
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no d/r no hatin no feedin no crew you spit first no bitin House rules!! I will drop tomarr aight |
yo lemme see how ima start this off
yo i battle newb bitchs like u all tha time they cant even rhyme. its like a fuckin crime i mean how can u be so bad at spittin not like ur spittin cuz ur shits probably bittin my verses hit u like a womens smack across the face kinda like when u hit on a girl and she pulls out the mace whys ur name flows when u know's ya flows dont flow y u try battlin a veteren who'll kick ya ass right out the doo two mo lines let me try to finish this u spit ur bittin shit while i be givin ur mom a lil kiss |
aight check it......
Nigga ill put you on the muder inc. Roster like if ya was ja rule..// Wit ya ludacris signature you like him and ya actin a fool..// Your record is wack and and ya bitch is about to get worked..// So call strobe cause ya bound to get murked..// I spit faster then you think..your probably like 3 years old and ya name is benny..// B/c with that wack as avatar ill make the bitch magicly move and say oh my god they killed kenny...// This nigga eric is already on a losin streak..Bitch wake up to reality..// B/c my rhymes is so ill my punch lines will rip ya head off like a mortal kombat fitality You wack ass nigga b/c what you have on me?? NOTHIN...// So the next time you battle me...Bitch think b4 you hit that submitt button..// |
uppin fo votes....Nice battle aight....
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Alright simply Eric your verse was mad basic and simple.
Really not good at all and your punches were weak really lightweight. Flows your verse was good your punches were personal to da core. vote=flows yo yall swing thru and check this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122780 |
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breakdown:
eric89: yo i battle newb bitchs like u all tha time they cant even rhyme. its like a fuckin crime ^^good wordplay bad punch 6/10 i mean how can u be so bad at spittin not like ur spittin cuz ur shits probably bittin ^^more good wordplay bittin line is played 4/10 my verses hit u like a womens smack across the face kinda like when u hit on a girl and she pulls out the mace ^^ok punch 5/10 whys ur name flows when u know's ya flows dont flow y u try battlin a veteren who'll kick ya ass right out the doo ^^first line was good 2nd made it bad 3/10 two mo lines let me try to finish this u spit ur bittin shit while i be givin ur mom a lil kiss ^^you talked too much about bitin weak finisher 2/10 overall: 20/50 (40%) .flows.: Nigga ill put you on the muder inc. Roster like if ya was ja rule..// Wit ya ludacris signature you like him and ya actin a fool..// ^^ok punch in first line good personal in 2nd 7/10 Your record is wack and and ya bitch is about to get worked..// So call strobe cause ya bound to get murked..// ^^ good punch 6/10 I spit faster then you think..your probably like 3 years old and ya name is benny..// B/c with that wack as avatar ill make the bitch magicly move and say oh my god they killed kenny...// ^^bad first line...good personal in 2nd line 5/10 This nigga eric is already on a losin streak..Bitch wake up to reality..// B/c my rhymes is so ill my punch lines will rip ya head off like a mortal kombat fitality ^^first line good mortal kombat fatality line is played 4/10 You wack ass nigga b/c what you have on me?? NOTHIN...// So the next time you battle me...Bitch think b4 you hit that submitt button..// ^^ok closer 2nd line is played too 5/10 overall: 27/50 (54%) vote:.flows....both of you had okay verses but .flows. you almost lost with all them played lines use something orijinal it will hit alot harder..eric your rhyme scheme is pretty basic nothing that would get you a win...played punch no personals good wordplay if u eleveta you will have alot of potential ~!1!~ |
Eric-Your shit was far too simple and whack.Flow was bad and creativity was even worse.
Best line-none Worst-whole damn thing Flows-nothing special.Lightyears better than Eric's verse.And I mean in every single way. Best line-This nigga eric is already on a losin streak..Bitch wake up to reality..// B/c my rhymes is so ill my punch lines will rip ya head off like a mortal kombat fitality Worst-Your record is wack and and ya bitch is about to get worked..// So call strobe cause ya bound to get murked..// Vote-Flow http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123302 ^^^ vote |
eric-your verse was whack....it was just too simple.....put a lil bit more effort into your verse.....u had no punches or creativity........thats all i gots to say
flows-your verse was better than eric's but your punches were very weak and ineffective.....u need to start tryin to get some harder punches and some more wordplay......u won this time because your opponent was whack but when u battle real vets u will need to come 100 times harder v/flows |
alright uppin for more votes lets go people.
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alright gentlemen. good fight good fight. eric's verse was very simple, it lacked attracting lines, punches or multi's so i blew through it quickly. Now with flows on the other hand, he had a good structure and lines, although a bit cliche. Flows was definatley more aggressive and personal on this one so i'll have to give it to him on this one.
vote=flows |
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more votes plz people plz lets get this closed by tonight
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Ight.. hurrs da breakdown
flow-eric punches-.flows. structure-.flows. wrodplay-eric flows wins this match cuz his punches won this biathc. his punches hit hard and they connected.. both elevate.. ight.. eric ur punches werent very good.. some didnt ocnnect.. otherwise u would have won wit better punches.. vote-flows |
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